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Tree

Tired tree, You hang so hollow; Who has stolen your joy? Why, just a moment ago You swayed and sang, Your whispering wind-song Whirling above me, And you were happy But now you are still, So deadly still, Somehow stricken Into a sad silence Bad weather, maybe, Or something I said? Won’t you speak? Or can’t you tell me? But from above, No weary rustle sounds; No branch bears a reply; Only your leaves fall, Slowly, softly, Painting the pallid ground Where I first heard Your voice.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/1/2008 5:03:00 AM
I love this!!! So simple yet implies how much you care about the tree as you stand there and ask it "Who has stolen your joy?" I like the way you gave the tree a bit of your time as you admired its state....Beautifully written...Sara...
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