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Treasure

We stumbled down the bar last night for a couple of pots and a fight We started on Beer, just for good cheer and then Brandy for good measure she sat with us at the end of the bar and said her name was Treasure Some bloke said he was off to bed and asked, could he take Treasure. Now Treasure happens to be the wife of a chum of mine whose doing Life in a Central Prison somewhere I said I would take good care of her He pulled out a knife and said he'd do life and it would be a pleasure to cut my throat He was only thinking of his mate "The Goat" and looking after Treasure! I knew his motive led him to bedding Treasure. So I bought him drinks and let him think that he'd got the better of me and when he was well and truly oiled I said I need a pee and did he? He agreed with me! I smashed my glass, that made him blink! We strolled out into the dark backyard he was really taking his leisure He smiled and murmured under his breath as he fumbled with his fly. He thought I didn't hear, but I did I heard his sigh as he murmured "Treasure" The bottle I'd hid in my overcoat pocket broke on his face and took out his eye socket All for that small sigh of pleasure while fumbling with his dick he would have to die quick because no one messed with Treasure

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/29/2015 10:17:00 PM
Suzanne, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/26/2015 7:10:00 AM
Suzanne, , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/26/2015 12:12:00 AM
Hi Suzanne, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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