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Treasure

I noticed her two weeks ago. She flew into my physics lab like hell itself was after her and tripped as she sat down. She's always late for classes, stammers her apologies, flustered and myopic, her glasses primly perched upon her nose. Accident-prone, she barreled through the library like Grant attacking Richmond, giggling nervously as she checked out her books. To me she is a treasure, a whirling dervish dressed in black and white, always black and white, like for her it's some particular religion. I asked her to the movies. She acted like I was the first who'd ever taken interest, she was flattered but she flatly and decidedly said no. She had thrown down the gauntlet, so I set out to woo her with my wit and charm, taking every opportunity to bump into her when and where I could. Finally she acquiesced, and when she slowed down enough to smile and chat and laugh and joke with me my heart was hers to keep!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/25/2012 6:53:00 PM
So glad the chase had a great ending. Sometimes the effort pays off. Great story!
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Date: 5/19/2012 9:19:00 PM
A touching tale of days gone by. A pleasure to read Keith keep up the good work. TLee
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Date: 5/19/2012 7:54:00 AM
I loved it... My hubby and I were both deep nerds... My color was blue... with the occasional brown.
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Date: 5/18/2012 3:16:00 PM
even your non-rhyming poems pique my interest. i like this poem very much and love the ending.
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Date: 5/18/2012 5:29:00 AM
I like this one Keith....so cute...well done!!! - Have a lovely day Keith. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/17/2012 11:54:00 PM
Oh this is so sweet- caught your butterfly, nice work, Bren : )
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