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Travelling Light

When I arrived, I came empty handed, before I knew about things to own. And slowly I learned about possessions, some that matter and some that don't. Those that carry heavy burdens, and those that are pleasantly given. I realized one day, as I felt a light breeze, winds could teach me how to travel with ease. Then I saw a bird fly like a plane, but it didn't carry a load on its wings. And the sun arriving at the stroke of dawn, comes weightless with the rays it brings. And a mother's kiss travels untold miles, on air filled with hugs and kisses. When a dear friend calls from faraway land, her voice travels like a ripple in a pond. When I turn my light-switch on, light fills my home without a sound. And the air I breathe travels so light, pulsating endlessly, to keep me alive. And the gaze I send to love of my life, travels like air to reach her smile. So I will return just the way I arrived, because the road to heaven travels light. September 23, 2017 Travelling Light Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 7/12/2022 2:17:00 AM
This has made me feel so light ! When we give away the encumbering weight from our thoughts and hands, we feel as light as thistledowns floating in the wind ! Lifting thoughts, dear Vijay !
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Date: 9/27/2017 12:43:00 AM
I came back here by accident. Looking for a new one and realize how very much I like this one. FAVE
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/27/2017 4:34:00 AM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 9/25/2017 9:13:00 AM
This is a GREAT poem--lovely, moving, presenting such fitting examples, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/25/2017 9:33:00 AM
Thank you Janice..appreciate your feedback!
Date: 9/24/2017 8:12:00 PM
I agree with Kim. This is the perfect write. Mine is so lacking in imagery compared to yours!! (I did not yet post it but will need to soon) I bet this one scores HIGH
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2017 10:50:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for such supportive comments !
Date: 9/24/2017 1:55:00 PM
Excellent write, Vijay! You are light of soul, but just as deep! :) Kim
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2017 3:26:00 PM
Thank you Kim..appreciate your comments!
Date: 9/24/2017 8:40:00 AM
This is a grandiose write my friend! I surely have enjoyed reading this illustrious poem here this morning! You have mastered the art of Free Verse I see, Great Work!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2017 8:55:00 AM
Thank you Russell for your lovely comments!
Date: 9/23/2017 5:27:00 PM
An inspired write Vijay. Your poem is alive with beauty and meaning. I especially love your first two stanzas, they are completely amazing. A great write. Good luck in the contest! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/23/2017 7:06:00 PM
Thank you Susan for your lovely feedback!
Date: 9/23/2017 4:54:00 PM
So beautifully said Vijay..Great write
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/23/2017 4:59:00 PM
Thank you Joseph for your lovely feedback!
Date: 9/23/2017 4:30:00 PM
you brought a new meaning into this theme, vijay... beautifully done!...huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/23/2017 4:39:00 PM
Thank you nette--enjoyed reading your comment!
Date: 9/23/2017 4:04:00 PM
This is both a beautiful and meaningful poem Vijay. I enjoyed reading this today! Good luck in the contest :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/23/2017 4:17:00 PM
Thank you Heidi--enjoyed reading your comments!

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