Travelling Light

When I arrived, I came empty handed,
before I knew about things to own.

And slowly I learned about possessions,
some that matter and some that don't.

Those that carry heavy burdens,
and those that are pleasantly given.

I realized one day, as I felt a light breeze,
winds could teach me how to travel with ease.

Then I saw a bird fly like a plane,
but it didn't carry a load on its wings.

And the sun arriving at the stroke of dawn,
comes weightless with the rays it brings.

And a mother's kiss travels untold miles,
on air filled with hugs and kisses.
 
When a dear friend calls from faraway land,
her voice travels like a ripple in a pond.

When I turn my light-switch on,
light fills my home without a sound.

And the air I breathe travels so light,
pulsating endlessly, to keep me alive.

And the gaze I send to love of my life,
travels like air to reach her smile.

So I will return just the way I arrived,
because the road to heaven travels light.

September 23, 2017
Travelling Light
Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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George Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 2:17 AM
This has made me feel so light ! When we give away the encumbering weight from our thoughts and hands, we feel as light as thistledowns floating in the wind ! Lifting thoughts, dear Vijay !
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 12:43 AM
I came back here by accident. Looking for a new one and realize how very much I like this one. FAVE
Pandit Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 4:34 AM
Thanks Andrea!
Canerdy Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 9:13 AM
This is a GREAT poem--lovely, moving, presenting such fitting examples, Vijay! Janice
Pandit Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 9:33 AM
Thank you Janice..appreciate your feedback!
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 8:12 PM
I agree with Kim. This is the perfect write. Mine is so lacking in imagery compared to yours!! (I did not yet post it but will need to soon) I bet this one scores HIGH
Pandit Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 10:50 PM
Thank you Andrea for such supportive comments !
Rodrigues Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 1:55 PM
Excellent write, Vijay! You are light of soul, but just as deep! :) Kim
Pandit Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 3:26 PM
Thank you Kim..appreciate your comments!
Sivey Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 8:40 AM
This is a grandiose write my friend! I surely have enjoyed reading this illustrious poem here this morning! You have mastered the art of Free Verse I see, Great Work!!
Pandit Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 8:55 AM
Thank you Russell for your lovely comments!
Ashley Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 5:27 PM
An inspired write Vijay. Your poem is alive with beauty and meaning. I especially love your first two stanzas, they are completely amazing. A great write. Good luck in the contest! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 7:06 PM
Thank you Susan for your lovely feedback!
May Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 4:54 PM
So beautifully said Vijay..Great write
Pandit Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 4:59 PM
Thank you Joseph for your lovely feedback!
Onclaud Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 4:30 PM
you brought a new meaning into this theme, vijay... beautifully done!...huggs
Pandit Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 4:39 PM
Thank you nette--enjoyed reading your comment!
Sands Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 4:04 PM
This is both a beautiful and meaningful poem Vijay. I enjoyed reading this today! Good luck in the contest :)
Pandit Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 4:17 PM
Thank you Heidi--enjoyed reading your comments!
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