Trapped

I am trapped in the past In all the mistakes that I have made I am trapped in a endless black hole and I can't find the way out I am trapped in hell where my only friend is the little red man who used to be a beautiful angel. He tells me that I am going to stay with him forever He tells me that I am the one he's never going to let go. I am trapped in a tornado of emotions. And that tornado had ripped apart everything that lived inside me. I am trapped within myself And that's where I have to stay. Because I have come to love the way my soul dances with my demons.

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Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 6/3/2017 11:00:00 AM

Really like this poem because it speaks to me. I can see myself in it. I am somewhat of amateur astronomer so I liked the reference to the black hole. Astronomically nothing escapes. Not even light. That is a very good metaphor feeling trapped. I like the line " And that's where I have to stay." It is finality- realizing who you are.. Excellent.