Translation

Lord Krishna's little dainty fingers,
nudge over the holes of his flute,
his scarlet red eyes camber,
coral red lips purse,
and little beads of sweat round ,
the arched eyebrows,
while raising the beguiling music.

The flock of birds abandon their nests,
encircle the Lord,
and slump over like the broken trees.
The cattle herd,
outspread their legs,
bow their heads with inert ears 
to hear the  Lord's divine music.



Orginally written by Perialvar (9th century poet/saint) in Tamil
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Callus Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 3:13 PM
Irrespective of the original poem in Tamil, your translation is enough for the reader to enjoy its descriptive element and suggested message that (divine) music can capture the attention of all living creatures. Best regards Supraja...paul
Kannan Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 2:25 AM
That's so nice to hear, Paul. Thank you for stopping by. Glad you loved it.
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 2:57 AM
this is really cool, Supraja. I quite enjoyed it. It's 2 a.m and for now, I am caught up here.
Kannan Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 3:32 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Andrea. Glad you enjoyed it.Take rest and have a nice sleep.
One Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 10:03 AM
Is this a poem by perialvar you have translated? You translated it well..
Kannan Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 10:12 AM
Yes SO. Original poem was written by him in Tamil and I translated here.
Malik Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 6:18 AM
Very nice :)
Kannan Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 10:19 AM
Thank you.
Pandit Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 5:37 AM
I know what you mean in this theme. Many have written about his divinity..you translated it well, Supraja.
Kannan Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 10:15 AM
True . I doubt whether I have done justice to the original poetry. Glad you liked it ...
Trifiatis Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 5:35 AM
Divine music transcends humans and is enjoyed by all animate and inanimate things dear, Supraja! In Greek Mythology we have a similar story where Orpheus plays his Lyre and animals follow him and even the stones! Excellent my dearest!
Kannan Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 10:14 AM
That's so nice to hear. Quite interesting. Thanks for the information. Glad you liked my translation.
Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 5:08 AM
Lovely, Supraja. Moving.
Kannan Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 10:12 AM
Thank you Line
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