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Transformation The Shield In MY Life It was a thunderous, illuminating night When He appeared and talked of the shield. I was there, just a face in the crowd, Elated by His energy and sight Enchanted by His charm and wit As truth filled my ears. But then not by choice He revealed to my dismay the shield Invisible to my eyes Hanging heavy from my chest Like a storms eternity. He did loosen the cord That bound that old worn battle shield, I tried to stop it from falling as it tumbled Crashing down around my feet. Shattered, broken into a hundred pieces. My heart began to weep. He smiled and said, “ Leave it and be free” Sobbing deep moans rumbled through my soul As I bent to pick up the pieces To take them as my own. Walking to a hillside. I laid the pieces down Laving them buried on the hill. I turned and walked away, With a flow of healing tears I heard his voice within my soul And in my heart I felt free from all my fears. Erich J. Goller Copyright 2003

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Date: 2/22/2012 2:59:00 PM
Felt very gothic and at the same time I saw Conan I used to love those genre's please DO grace my contests with your writes again, nice to meet you! Congrad's Light & Love
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Erich Goller
Date: 2/22/2012 4:47:00 PM
thank you very much Debbie for your heartfelt words.
Date: 2/21/2012 8:26:00 PM
congrats Erich on a terrific first place win for this incredible write so prolific luv..
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Erich Goller
Date: 2/21/2012 8:59:00 PM
thank you very much Linda, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.Hugs!Erich
Date: 2/21/2012 4:00:00 PM
Erich, This poem is wonderful. Very uplifting. Well done, my friend. Congrats on winning Debbie's contest...............S.Ronthorpe
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Erich Goller
Date: 2/21/2012 4:48:00 PM
thank you very much Samual, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.Erich
Date: 2/21/2012 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Debbie Guzzi's~ "Transformation" contest *Erich*. Love, Carol
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Erich Goller
Date: 2/21/2012 11:57:00 AM
thank you very much Carol.Hugs!Erich
Date: 2/21/2012 10:34:00 AM
very engrossing... congrats ~ `sashi
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Erich Goller
Date: 2/21/2012 11:56:00 AM
thank you very much Sashi.Erich
Date: 2/19/2012 10:15:00 PM
Great write, Erich! Wonderful metaphors. I'm happy I read it tonight. I saw your reply to Vie. Change the name when the contest is over. I agree with you. Sometimes the title is important to the piece. Have a great night. Blessings, Rhonda
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Erich Goller
Date: 2/20/2012 10:13:00 AM
thank you very much Rhonda,Hugs!Erich
Date: 2/19/2012 1:39:00 PM
really awesome write ~always p.d.
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Erich Goller
Date: 2/19/2012 1:59:00 PM
thank you very much Destroyer for your inspiring words. Hugs!Erich

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