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Transcending Sunset

M e d a l l i o n  and deep tangerine skies
          so calming and serene before my eyes-
reflection's float upon a reverie's mist
              the sun and the eventide have  k i s s e d.
  I sought tranquility as I reminisced.

        White seagulls turn to ebon  s i l h o u e t t e s
soaring above clouds I shan't forget-
                mother nature deserves veneration
for it's  b e a u t y  in a sunset's creation.
  I am drowning in a transcending sensation. 
         I am  a s t o u n d e d  in the majesty of a sunset's revelation.


June 1, 2018

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Date: 6/3/2018 5:18:00 PM
good one Laura, congrats on your high placing, regards, Kevin x
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Date: 6/3/2018 8:35:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Laura, with this beauty.
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Date: 6/3/2018 7:14:00 AM
Congrats on your win, luloo.
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Date: 6/3/2018 6:05:00 AM
Simply Beautiful, Laura Loo. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Elaine
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Date: 6/1/2018 6:27:00 PM
I live near a lake, and your poem and my times through the years of spending time on its banks thinking made me think your poem is "universal."
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Date: 6/1/2018 2:58:00 PM
Striking and breathtaking, Laura. Your imagery is stunning; 'reflection's float upon a reverie's mist the sun and the eventide have kissed.' and 'White seagulls turn to ebon silhouettes soaring above clouds I shan't forget-' - my heart soars on the precious beauty and of your poetic lines. A spectacular reflective moment in time! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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