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Tranquil Sea-Trois-Par-Huit

Moon river encircled by craters moons hidden treasure on show to see moonlit nights you can sit and dream knowing that the highly poisonous gases can ruin that journey Shining blue on the moon the world sees the Eagle landing on Tranquil Sea* *Sea of Tranquility on the moon. Penned on 10/06/2014

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/16/2014 9:43:00 AM

Hi Seren, I think that the only reason why your poem didn't place was because the contest called for a "body of water" but apart from that, you did a great job with your write!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/15/2014 7:56:00 PM

Seren, this is a most beautiful write - the imagery is fantastic - Bravo, my friend and a congratulations!

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/16/2014 1:10:00 AM

Thanks but wasn't good enough to get a place...Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/10/2014 5:11:00 AM

Perfect entry to the contest, the body of the water being tranquil sea, seren

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/11/2014 2:48:00 AM

Thank you Ram, the Sea of Tranquility has a mythical sound to its name ...Seren