Kash Poet Poet Cinquain

Trampled Flowers of Emotion

Trampled 
mauled emotions
seeking an escape path
reverberate heart's corridor
confined.

Released
ink of sorrow
emotions' molten flow
compose a soothing serenade
heart felt.

Tear drops
sprinkle water
refresh trampled flowers,
flowers of emotion again
blooming.




© kashinath karmakar (12th Feb. 2012)
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Placement: 5th; (Feb. 2012)

Contest:Trample

Sponsor:Paula Swanson

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Debbie Guzzi March 1, 2012 at 3:46 PM hoping all is well and you are happy! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown February 20, 2012 at 10:57 AM Congratulations on the super win in ~Paula's~ "Trample" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Christopher Bunton February 18, 2012 at 4:15 PM Congratulations!

Cindy Lu February 18, 2012 at 7:55 AM solemn poetry, excellently written. Nice work. Cindy

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 18, 2012 at 4:21 AM Wow nice one Kash congrats xx

Samual Ronthorpe February 17, 2012 at 3:20 PM Kash, beautiful form. A wonderfully worded poem full of emotion. For me, it doesn't get any better than this. Well done and congrats on making the winners list....................S.Ronthorpe

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2012 at 9:03 AM Kash, your well crafted Cinquain are here on the list where they deserve to be. BIG congrats to you!!! I'm off to the gym now and hope to see more poems of yours later. Luv, Andrea

Carrie Richards February 17, 2012 at 9:01 AM flowers of emotion again blooming....love that line! (sometimes it takes a few tears and a lot of hard work to nourish a heart). Lovely poem, Kash...congratulations!

Barbara Gorelick February 17, 2012 at 7:28 AM Love this, especially the last one. I would have placed this higher. Congrats. BG

Lizanne Scholtz February 17, 2012 at 7:04 AM Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write Kash, love Elizabeth

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 16, 2012 at 9:25 PM congrats Kash on a magnificent win for a masterful write on trample luv.. deeply emotional piece luv..

Robert Pettit February 16, 2012 at 9:05 PM Congratulations on your win Kash. This was a clever triple cinquain write.

Joyce Johnson February 16, 2012 at 8:22 PM A pretty form well done. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 14, 2012 at 1:44 PM I belive we have a first place winner Kash.. this is ultra superb.. making it a favorite piece on VD..good luck in contest ..

Andrea Dietrich February 13, 2012 at 10:21 PM hey, I was kind of thinking of writing to this effect. Not as extensively as you have done but about emotions trampled and using the rose in it. Hope you won't mind if I do a somewhat similar theme. If I even have time. kash, I am SO busy, you would not believe it. I don't think I will catch up here tonight and I need to get off soon. HAppy VAlentine's DAy to you, my very good friend here at Soup.

Diane Christian February 13, 2012 at 4:55 PM a super poem, thanks for your kind comments and yes i will mesage John, take care god bless you.

Nette Onclaud February 13, 2012 at 11:34 AM this is a solid, pining write, kashi... the heart yearns for healing... my kind of poetry!!!... come visit!... have a happy hearts day!... 2 30am here; zzz z..:)huggs!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 13, 2012 at 11:18 AM Great lines! I love how the heart mends. I think you've got a winner here.

Cyndi Macmillan February 13, 2012 at 11:11 AM I really enjoyed this Kash! Simple and meaning-filled. I think it will do well in the contest! Yes, my funny write was intended for Susan's contest, but it is too long ... I entered it anyways, as I thought she'd at least get a chuckle from the read. Thanks for your lovely comments and the positive energy you ALWAYS bring to the soup. Hugs, Cyndi

David Williams February 13, 2012 at 9:15 AM Kash this is so cool, great flow and rhythm, I love it..David

Dinda Minardi February 13, 2012 at 8:52 AM If this is a metaphor, what a great imagination you have here, Mister! Is there any of your poems I won't enjoy? :)

Debra Squyres February 13, 2012 at 7:24 AM Beautiful !!