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Trampled Flowers of Emotion

Trampled 
mauled emotions
seeking an escape path
reverberate heart's corridor
confined.

Released
ink of sorrow
emotions' molten flow
compose a soothing serenade
heart felt.

Tear drops
sprinkle water
refresh trampled flowers,
flowers of emotion again
blooming.




© kashinath karmakar (12th Feb. 2012)
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Placement: 5th; (Feb. 2012)

Contest:Trample

Sponsor:Paula Swanson

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/1/2012 3:46:00 PM

hoping all is well and you are happy! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/20/2012 10:57:00 AM

Congratulations on the super win in ~Paula's~ "Trample" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Christopher Bunton

Date: 2/18/2012 4:15:00 PM

Congratulations!

Cindy Lu

Date: 2/18/2012 7:55:00 AM

solemn poetry, excellently written. Nice work. Cindy

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/18/2012 4:21:00 AM

Wow nice one Kash congrats xx

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/17/2012 3:20:00 PM

Kash, beautiful form. A wonderfully worded poem full of emotion. For me, it doesn't get any better than this. Well done and congrats on making the winners list....................S.Ronthorpe

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2012 9:03:00 AM

Kash, your well crafted Cinquain are here on the list where they deserve to be. BIG congrats to you!!! I'm off to the gym now and hope to see more poems of yours later. Luv, Andrea

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/17/2012 9:01:00 AM

flowers of emotion again blooming....love that line! (sometimes it takes a few tears and a lot of hard work to nourish a heart). Lovely poem, Kash...congratulations!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/17/2012 7:28:00 AM

Love this, especially the last one. I would have placed this higher. Congrats. BG

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 2/17/2012 7:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write Kash, love Elizabeth

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2012 9:25:00 PM

congrats Kash on a magnificent win for a masterful write on trample luv.. deeply emotional piece luv..

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/16/2012 9:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Kash. This was a clever triple cinquain write.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/16/2012 8:22:00 PM

A pretty form well done. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/14/2012 1:44:00 PM

I belive we have a first place winner Kash.. this is ultra superb.. making it a favorite piece on VD..good luck in contest ..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2012 10:21:00 PM

hey, I was kind of thinking of writing to this effect. Not as extensively as you have done but about emotions trampled and using the rose in it. Hope you won't mind if I do a somewhat similar theme. If I even have time. kash, I am SO busy, you would not believe it. I don't think I will catch up here tonight and I need to get off soon. HAppy VAlentine's DAy to you, my very good friend here at Soup.

Diane Christian

Date: 2/13/2012 4:55:00 PM

a super poem, thanks for your kind comments and yes i will mesage John, take care god bless you.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/13/2012 11:34:00 AM

this is a solid, pining write, kashi... the heart yearns for healing... my kind of poetry!!!... come visit!... have a happy hearts day!... 2 30am here; zzz z..:)huggs!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/13/2012 11:18:00 AM

Great lines! I love how the heart mends. I think you've got a winner here.

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 2/13/2012 11:11:00 AM

I really enjoyed this Kash! Simple and meaning-filled. I think it will do well in the contest! Yes, my funny write was intended for Susan's contest, but it is too long ... I entered it anyways, as I thought she'd at least get a chuckle from the read. Thanks for your lovely comments and the positive energy you ALWAYS bring to the soup. Hugs, Cyndi