Trailer Park Queen

WAFTING through the open window
A DULCET floral FRAGRANCE
Adds to the TRANQUILITY
Bubbles in her BLISSFUL bath dance

An old screen door creaks open
He approaches, WHISPERS, “My queen,
Your royal carriage awaits.”
She emerges and dons her jeans

“My lord,” she replies ELOQUENTLY,
A LILTING quality in her tone,
“’Tis our picnic basket you desire most."
She laughs, emits a subtle groan.

Indeed, the old farm horse and buggy
Are prepared for the couple's ride
Through spring fields in LAVENDER SPLENDOR
So they open the trailer door, step outside

Tenderly she reaches up, takes his hand
He gently pulls her onto the carriage
This lord and his loving queen know
True wealth is found in their marriage



*For Andrea's "Beautiful Words" challenge.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 8/12/2015 12:47:00 AM
Top marks here Carolyn, for an uplifting write on one of life's true treasures..'
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Date: 4/25/2010 7:23:00 PM
Nice win Carolyn. Keep them coming. Charles
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Date: 4/22/2010 3:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Carolyn...yours are always worth reading...Love, Audrey
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Date: 4/21/2010 12:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Carolyn. These words are worthy of royalty...and they are beautifully expressed with thoughtfulness and affection. I wish all the success and happiness your heart desires. Have a great day. Love and admiration, Andrew.
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Date: 4/19/2010 5:11:00 AM
Sweet tailor park love Congrats Carolyn
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Date: 4/19/2010 2:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea's Beautiful Words Contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2010 8:47:00 PM
Carolyn, Congratulations on you win in Andrea's first contest. I enjoyed the enchantment in this sweet poem and so glad it is in the winner's circle. Love, Connie
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Date: 4/18/2010 10:00:00 AM
This was a delightful, and twist to the contest, Carolyn! Congratulations on your win, and the creative uniqueness of your poem! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/18/2010 9:42:00 AM
beautiful living words placed well describe true love simply lived on a grand a superb life between two,,,,Blessings and Congratulations on your win,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 4/18/2010 8:05:00 AM
Congrats Carolyn on your winning poem in Andrea's contest.. an amazing write and use of her beautiful words.. happy to be sharing placement with my good friend..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/18/2010 7:37:00 AM
Lovely tale you made from the words. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 4/18/2010 1:15:00 AM
Congratulations, Carolyn, your poem here was quite unique and I enjoyed the read! Thanks so much for participating in my first contest ever here! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/15/2010 4:30:00 PM
Interesting write...True wealth is found a true love and committment between people...Keep the creative pen flowing..Good luck in the contest..Sara
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Date: 4/13/2010 7:41:00 AM
This is indeed beautiful Carolyn...I actually read it three times because I could not get enough of this beautiful senario ! *smiles* Super poem dear ! james
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Date: 4/12/2010 10:38:00 AM
Sure to be on the podium with this lovey poem Carolyn, good luck in Andrea's contest >> James
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Date: 4/11/2010 1:35:00 PM
Oh so beautiful.Yes Carolyn in some ways I to agree with you but most people need to grieve atleast a year.Your dad was one of the lucky ones.Mabee I think different.Teresa
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Date: 4/11/2010 7:22:00 AM
A wonderful and delightful read. I wish you great success in the contest. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 4/11/2010 3:24:00 AM
What a beauty Car,full of fragrant sweetness,can see this with the winner,how nice to be the queen of a man's heart,i ll be even happy to be a princess. .lovely-Charma.
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Date: 4/10/2010 8:35:00 PM
Looks like you have all ten of you ducks in a row Carolyn, Big Smile! Awesome job. Good luck in competition. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/10/2010 12:32:00 PM
LOL wonderful write here, Carolyn. Good luck in the contest. Hope you're having a great weekend and thanks so much for your comments on my turtle write.
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Date: 4/10/2010 11:32:00 AM
So beautiful, Carolyn. Very romantic. Good luck on the contest. You have soupmail. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 4/10/2010 8:37:00 AM
Truly a rustic masterpiece, dear Carolyn. This could very well be Cinderella II, country style. Love, daver
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Date: 4/10/2010 2:35:00 AM
Wow! This one, Carolyn, is a nice change from the other rather common negative trailer dweller's alliteration phrase. Good job at looking beyond the surface and into hearts. Excellent poem. A winner for sure. Love, Dane
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Date: 4/10/2010 2:19:00 AM
Another romantic beauty from you, Carolyn! - 'Bubbles in her BLISSFUL bath dance'...great alliteration! Sounds like you've posted another winner here!...Gotta' look up DULCET in the dictionary though (Yeah, I know, I'm a dummy) - Tim
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Date: 4/9/2010 10:58:00 PM
Carolyn, I so enjoyed this romantic poem. It should do well in Andrea's contest. Very creative! Aloha, Connie
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