Notes About The Poem

This is the untold legend of Narcissiphus.

Sysiphus was of course the Greek man, who spent his life rolling a big stone uphill. When he had almost succeeded the stone always stumbled down and he repeated the effort ad infinitum.

Narcissus was another Greek legend, who admired his image in the reflection of a lake and felt very smug about what he saw.

mirror neuron is a neuron that fires both when an animal acts and when the animal observes the same action performed by another. Thus, the neuron "mirrors" the behavior of the other, as though the observer were itself acting. Such neurons have been directly observed in primate species (Wikipedia).

When Narcissiphus (licensed by poetry and my imagination) looks up from the bottom of the lake, the mirror (at what surface?) lies in reflection, perspective and metaphore.

 

 

 

Tragedy of Narcissiphus

Tragedy of Narcissiphus

The guy had enough letting go of the wicked stone
Held on for dear downhill life and tumbled to the
edge of a lake admired his image and reflected in vain

The picture had arrested in time no mirror image here
In memory encrusted he and the rock played separate
mind games so he embraced the situation’s gravity
and jumped into the water breathless but finally free

Written for contest: prompt 'mirror' in 70 words or less
Word count 70 words including title 17 May 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 8:04 AM
Congrats, Kai!
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