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Tradewinds

Trade winds gently flow caress the leaves of tall palms kiss soft, warm brown skin

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Jack Horne

Date: 5/5/2014 10:23:00 AM

just love this one, my dear friend, so descriptive. Hope you and Andrea are having a great week xx

James Fraser

Date: 7/18/2010 3:31:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Audrey, an image I would love to witness >> James

John Rhinem

Date: 7/14/2010 10:53:00 PM

Smile ~ "Tradewinds" ~ Kissing a gentle and precious heart as, again, "Your Loveliness" so seems to hold ~ This is a very soft and pleasant breeze which seems to blow so, fluently from "Your Beautiful Heart" ~ Smile, the world is blessed by "You Dear Audrey;" just as I myself have been....Smile, "You Are An Angel!!!" ~ Again, "Beautiful Poem" ~ "Much Love & Warmth to You Always," John!:) ~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2010 11:11:00 AM

Congratulations Audrey on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Tropical Treasures". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/11/2010 9:07:00 PM

Congrats on the 6th place win

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/11/2010 12:58:00 PM

So happy for you, Dimples! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/11/2010 12:44:00 PM

Very nice. congrats on your win. Love, Joyce

Daver Austin

Date: 7/11/2010 10:35:00 AM

A Southsea delight! The last line is fablulous. Love, Dave

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2010 9:56:00 AM

wow, this one is beautiful and sensuous. a well deserved win. LUv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 7/11/2010 9:55:00 AM

Congratulations, Audrey. on a fine poem's performance. Agape, Moses

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/11/2010 9:21:00 AM

Have been missing palm trees your years now but you brought me back nice memories, Audrey!.. Thank you for your kind comments and have a great week and of course cograts!!!!...Love, Gert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/11/2010 9:07:00 AM

Congrats Audrey on your success in my Tropical Treasures contest with this amazing and beautiful write captured from the vacation photos so well.. thankxxx for supporting my contest.. with luv..

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/11/2010 5:12:00 AM

This sounds like Hawaii to me, Audrey! I can see the palm trees swaying. (I grew up in South Florida...and hurricanes.) Good luck in the contest. Smiles, Dane Ann

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/10/2010 8:11:00 PM

Great image of the tropics in your haiku, Audrey. Always wishing you luck in contests. And I enjoyed your exchange with Rick below. He's such a sweetie! Love, Carolyn

Audrey Haick

Date: 7/10/2010 6:22:00 PM

I guess you know why you crack yourself up, Rick! You forget "I AM WOMAN". We multi-task!!LOL Good weekend to you! Peace, love, Audrey

Rick Parise

Date: 7/10/2010 5:48:00 PM

Nice imagery going on here!very nice(aren't you suppose to be in judging) LOL ~~I crack myself up!~Blessings ~Rick