Trade Secret

My Aunt Ethel told me
that nothing rivals
our family quilts

“Not for sheer artistry
or skill in design... BUT,”
here she leaned in
for emphasis-
“the secret is
the material itself!”

For nothing could rival
the intense radiance
of colors in florescent hues

And nothing could rival
the endless patterns
of electrifying
sometimes-psychedelic variety

And nothing could rival
the insulating quality
of thick fibers, so effectively
shielding against the cold

No, nothing could rival
the varied textures
the swirls, the swoops, geometric shapes
lines and grooves 

“Yes,” she told me, confidingly-
“...the very best quilts are made of
polyester pant-suits!”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Faulkner Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 8:58 PM
Hah, what a perfect ending line!
Mcferran Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 4:18 PM
Thank you so much! ;)
Krutsinger Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 3:30 AM
My children have been fighting over ownership of a hippie flower quilt made by my sister in 1971 out of polyester pantsuits! When they get hold of it, they hide it, and keep it hidden until all the sisters leave, because there is only one, and it is as warm and true-colored and vibrant and resilient and fresh-looking as the day it was created. They have other quilts, but they are CRAZY about this one. Aptly called Crazy Quilt. Thanks for the reminder my friend! I had forgotten about it until I read this beauty!
Mcferran Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Glad this brought back pleasant memories for you! This "conversation" never actually happened, but I thought it would be funny if it had. I did get a gloriously 70's polyester pantsuit quilt from my aunts as a wedding present... and like you say, they stay vibrant, warm and new-looking forever!
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