Tracks

Snow has spread a canvas
over the forest floor,
and I see how alive
the woods are:
tracks tell the comings and goings
of furry and feathered things.

The foxes have walked on the ridge,
their trail straight with purpose –
unlike the squirrels’ Brownian motion.

The pheasants have printed arrows;
perhaps
I shall follow
their directions -
who knows to what treasure
they may lead?

December 26, 2017
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Gauthier Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 1:44 PM
A lovely piece, Agnes.
Musser Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 12:09 PM
"Brownian motion" - Einstein would be proud. For me, the use of the phrase was a pleasant surprise that unfolded with meaning. Thanks.
Krampe Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 3:49 PM
Happy new year, Jim. Trust a physicist to pick up on the term ;)
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Your imagery is amazing Agnes and i adore the pheasant's footprints being likened to arrows - absolutely brilliant my friend and another one for Brian's contests!!! . Into my faves:-) hugs jan xx
Krampe Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 1:58 PM
Thank you, Jan. Pheasant tracks really do look like arrows; they are lacking the spur many other bird prints have. Just google :)
One Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 6:31 AM
Great imagery and profound ending.. good question, you never know until you follow...
Krampe Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 1:58 PM
Thank you for your kind comment, Silent One.
Parker Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 10:15 PM
a true sense of life everywhere that moves around unseen
Krampe Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 1:59 PM
Thank you, Frederic.
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