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Tracing Angels

Somewhere within the misty shroud of heaven A finger, traces angels, in the air Wondering if they are truly present Why they whisper dreams no one can hear Soft tingle of a touch, a gentle “psst” As testy as a lone mosquito’s buzz Torturing the calm of dreamless sleep When asked “why me” the answer is “because” So, sleep in fitful murmurings, and dream Of mists, of heaven’s shroud, of feathered wings Etch lazily your dream upon the night And ponder why it is you fear such things As fingers trace their angels in the air Lulled to sleep by voices they can’t hear

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Date: 9/23/2023 10:51:00 PM
This has a holy energy and a dreamy feel. I like it and your imagination.
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Date: 9/22/2023 11:23:00 AM
A wonderful concept, angles whisper dreams..As testy as a lone mosquito’s buzz Torturing the calm of dreamless sleep" clever poetry we relate to. Compelling John I too am faving this gem! I Am Anaya
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Date: 9/22/2023 6:57:00 AM
Melodic verse John, enjoyed!
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Date: 9/22/2023 5:01:00 AM
I'd be only too honored to be awakened by a whispering angel. "...of mists, of heaven's shroud, of feathered wings." When you write phrases like this, John, the dimensions of your talent is revealed.
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