Tracing Angels

Somewhere within the misty shroud of heaven
A finger, traces angels, in the air
Wondering if they are truly present
Why they whisper dreams no one can hear

Soft tingle of a touch, a gentle “psst”
As testy as a lone mosquito’s buzz
Torturing the calm of dreamless sleep
When asked “why me” the answer is “because”

So, sleep in fitful murmurings, and dream
Of mists, of heaven’s shroud, of feathered wings
Etch lazily your dream upon the night
And ponder why it is you fear such things

As fingers trace their angels in the air
Lulled to sleep by voices they can’t hear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Jones Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 10:51 PM
This has a holy energy and a dreamy feel. I like it and your imagination.
Anaya Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 11:23 AM
A wonderful concept, angles whisper dreams..As testy as a lone mosquito’s buzz Torturing the calm of dreamless sleep" clever poetry we relate to. Compelling John I too am faving this gem! I Am Anaya
Goff Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 6:57 AM
Melodic verse John, enjoyed!
Lane Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 5:01 AM
I'd be only too honored to be awakened by a whispering angel. "...of mists, of heaven's shroud, of feathered wings." When you write phrases like this, John, the dimensions of your talent is revealed.
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