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Trace of Sadness

Trace of sadness wracks your tear-stained eyes and stream of sorrow creases your weary face. You have been crying and you cannot hide it, it is plain for all to see. Now you know it is such an imperfect world, yet, you just have to carry that heavy cross. It is a rough road to the hill of Calvary – Eden does not exist. Sadly you wish for the past to return to get away from your present trials. But life isn't that way and you know it, you just have to carry on. So stand straight, bravely face the tempest, with your pride intact and your head unbowed. Wipe away the trace of sadness from your eyes and find a different you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/21/2008 2:48:00 AM
lovely piece, Fred. Dishearteningly lovely, if that makes any sense.
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Date: 6/11/2008 9:47:00 AM
So very well written . Sometimes easier said than done. None the less, it is what needs to be done. And now, I am very sad. Love, Shar
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Date: 6/11/2008 7:17:00 AM
Brilliantly written. This piece speaks the truth about life and what I like most about it is the fact that it's real! I like the simplicity of the language, nothing's complicated to grasp. Great message, I truly enjoyed. Milt
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Date: 6/11/2008 3:30:00 AM
This is an inspiring, strong poem of the beauty of overcoming from within - one of my favorite subjects. :) Extremely well said, I love this message. Awesome, Kristin
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Date: 6/11/2008 3:23:00 AM
This reminds me of a song I just wrote, I love this, Your friend always, Christy
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