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Toy Boats Made of Paper

Think, children: what will you tell
your grandchildren when they ask
about Earth--once bursting green
and red and yellow with blossoms
everywhere, and bushes serene 
in shadows of lime-colored trees,
with bird songs filling the air?

I hope you'll remember turquoise seas
brimming with life, color dancing on
water, boats with white sails, beaches,
seagulls, sandpipers, whales. Men fishing
creeks, children's splashing feet, sitting
beneath Summer's lush leaves,
making toy boats made of paper.

I know you'll recall purple mountains so tall,
snow-crested peaks of lilac at eveningfall;
inhaling perfumed blossoms and wonder
of pines, you could hear aspens whispering,
jays poking fun, noisy creeks in their run,
deer peeking quickly behind gentle oaks,
a magical potpourri for the mind.

Grandchildren will smile as you gaze out 
the window, attempting to find memories
of Earth as it was long ago, before losing
our way in pollution's crazed mind. But now
all she can find: industries' emissions, urban pall,
oceans clogged, forests burned, icecaps gone,
plastics, dust, muck, sun going blind...

      toy boats made of paper, bird so.......
forgotten now
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Lawrence Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 10:43 PM
Dear Ann , So very happy to find a kindred soul as well ! Thank you for your visit and comments on my poem . Yes I too love our dear Mother Earth. Your poem is powerful, insightful and sad… I have a visceral response . Beautifully expressed. I look forward to reading more of you and your heart . Big hugs to you , Susan :)
Peck Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 3:24 PM
Dear Susan, Thank you so much for your wonderful comments! It's sad that so many turn a blind eye toward our precious Earth's condition. We may try to save her once it's too late. Your poetry overwhelms me with its beauty! Hugs to you and a Merry Christmas :)
Radice Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 12:56 AM
A beautifully sad poem Ann that describes just what we are losing. The earth is as fragile as those paper boats you refer to. I sense we've very nearly sailed. Cheers - Gary
Peck Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 2:23 PM
Thank you for much for your comments, Gary. I believe you're right, there's no going back now. We've lost so many species, so many woodlands. And still some deny...
Mcintosh Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 8:08 AM
Such a horrifying thought train... so sad. God bless you always. You've done an amazing job with this. God bless you. Love, Gina
Peck Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 3:46 PM
Dear Gina, Thank you so much for your kind words! Yes, it is a very bleak future we face if we don't start loving Mother Earth. Thanks so much for commenting. And God bless you, too!
Faulkner Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 8:39 PM
How poignant, all the beauty of nature now in danger of being lost forever, I will need to return to this one, am faving it!
Peck Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 9:51 AM
Thanks, Michelle! I appreciate that. We'd better hurry if we want to save Mother Earth. That seems to be on the back burner, though.
Peckham Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 8:04 AM
This poem is powerful and accurate. It should wake people up and make them think! The language and descriptions are beautiful until the last stanza when the reality of the future kicks in. More power to you! Thanks for sharing! I would like to be actively activist but at 92 I cannot do everything I wish I could!
Peck Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 10:04 AM
Also, Hooray for you! Writing uncommonly beautiful poetry at 92! It seems, about age 75 is when people tend to put us on the shelf as nice antiques with, of course, no mind. We'll show them!! `
Peck Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 8:49 AM
Nor can I, so I try to be an activist through my poetry, but, of course, a lot don't want the truth. Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Barbara. I value your opinions.
Romios Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 4:21 PM
Hi Ann! I see beauty whereI live,)) Come on down to my backyard..,orange tree, and three enormous pines! People can be oinkers!, no insulting the pigs))... You describe the city I live in to a T, Our lake, kayaking..kids splashing...am sure there are hundred of cities like mine. Well done verses Ann! Panagiota
Peck Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 7:04 PM
Hi Pangi may I call you that? Thanks for your comments. I'm still overwhelmed by your masterpiece POTD! I'm an activist and feel poetry is my voice, so I write a lot of poems people don't want to read. It's necessary. If you have time, read my "Today I Saw Democracy Die." It was earlier this year. I think you would like it :)
Hankins Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 12:55 PM
Lovely work, Ann. When I look around and see nature's beauty and, then, realize what we are doing to it, I want to sit down and sob. Your poem needs wide dissemination, probably starting with POTD!
Hankins Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 5:45 PM
Absolutely astounding the number of people who simply believe it's all a hoax!
Peck Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 5:07 PM
Thank you so much, Milton. We're killing the earth faster than was predicted. News today said EPA issued a Code Red because of global warming. Sometimes I feel like only a few of us realize the enormity of our situation.
Clear Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 11:44 AM
You bring all the beauty and joy back to me, sweet Anne......lovely lady
Peck Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 12:24 PM
Thanks, Suzanne. I just read that the major weather system, which gives us El Nino and La Nina, isn't functioning correctly. I didn't word this well, but it's major. Thanks for your sweet comments :)
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 10:52 AM
Beautiful descriptions. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing. I echo your sentiments
Peck Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 12:19 PM
Thanks, Rama. It's disappearing before our eyes. Few butterflies this year, almost no bunnies. My heart breaks.
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