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These here trails are long and wide; I've ridden them for years. I gave up the outlaw ways some time ago and faced my fears. I'm a visitor in this town; folks are giving me the evil eye, Riding on my horse with a gun at my side I feel danger’s nigh. Though I haven't had to draw my gun in a very long while, I've never backed down from any fight that ain't my style. But I won't be here much longer; I'm just passing through, However, if someone challenges me they'll be sad they drew. In the corner of my eye, I see some- one walking my way, I don't want to wound a man today or have him be prey. I slowed down my horse and greeted him with a nod, He drew his gun and pulled his trigger but missed, I was awed. I jumped off my horse, grabbed my gun and shot him dead, He didn't have a chance to shoot back he fell like lead. Mounted my trusted friend and left that ghost of a town, It seemed odd that the onlookers were no longer around. I didn't want to relive my gun fighting days but I'm no coward, That day, I put my old life behind me and it's happy trails onward. *I haven't a clue if this is correct, but I decided to give it a go. 01/20/2021 Contest: Cowboy Sponsor: Line Gauthier Sponsored by Line Gauthier.

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Date: 2/6/2021 9:40:00 PM
Neat poem Alexis! You made it easy to picture what was happening in this poem story.
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Date: 2/6/2021 2:18:00 AM
Back with congrats Alexis, have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Date: 2/4/2021 5:29:00 PM
Very nicely told story Alexis, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 2/4/2021 10:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest, Alexis. Well-deserved. I enjoyed your western tale so much! Thanks for your kind comments re my win. Bob
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Date: 2/4/2021 7:56:00 AM
Great effort Alexis. I think it's just dandy! Congratulations on the HM! Linda
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Date: 2/4/2021 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful cowboy story/write. Yes, "happy trails onward." Enjoy your win/day with blessings.................
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Date: 1/22/2021 12:01:00 PM
Wow I thought I was watching a cowboy movie or part of a series, I think it's a winner, so well penned Alexis. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/21/2021 12:34:00 PM
this is very good work, Alexis!! I hope I can come up with one as good as yours!
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Date: 1/21/2021 6:04:00 AM
Your cowboy story rides brilliantly, Alexis. Reminded me of scenes from some old movies. All the best.
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Date: 1/21/2021 5:39:00 AM
Love it. Best wishes in the contest. Love to you and God bless you too
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Date: 1/21/2021 2:17:00 AM
- A Cowboy is never a coward ... love your story, Alexis :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/20/2021 11:07:00 PM
Seems like you entered a ghost town with ghost all around. A great cowboy tale. Best for a win. ~~
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Date: 1/20/2021 8:56:00 PM
This is awesome, Alexis! It's very interesting and well rhymed and the language is authentic. It's a Fave. Best wishes for the contest. :=)
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Date: 1/20/2021 10:05:00 PM
Hi Evelyn, Thank you so much for such a kind review; I appreciate the fav and the visit:-) Alexis
Date: 1/20/2021 4:48:00 PM
Super-duper cowboy story, Alexis. This is headed for a win in the contest, because the story line grips the reader and there's an internal as well as external conflict going on. ~ Old Hoss
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Date: 1/20/2021 10:02:00 PM
Hi Gershon, Thank you so much for such a wonderful review. I appreciate your support:-) Alexis
Date: 1/20/2021 3:40:00 PM
Loved it Alexis, the old west facinates me, I've read hundreds of books. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 1/20/2021 10:01:00 PM
Hi Tom, Thank you so much. My dad loved cowboys and western movies;I love them too because of my dad. I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis
Date: 1/20/2021 3:15:00 PM
Absolutely correct Alexis, it's a wonderful Cowboy story/poem, a good contender for the contest... Belle :-)
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Date: 1/20/2021 9:58:00 PM
Hi Belle, Thank you so much. I appreciate your support. Thanks for being the first one to comment on this write:-) Alexis

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