Anonomus Scorpio Poet Monorhyme

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Tower

Imprisoned in thoughts at this midnight hour
All directions of the horizon, my eyes do scour
Searching for relief from this daunting power
At its base, however, could anything flower?
When black rain is the only moistening shower
Attacking demons, always looking to devour
My will, they be slain with intentional dour
Battling from my highest point, I will not cower
Never stopping, my intuitive will to empower
In time, will the keys I make release me from this Tower?

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Jeff Kyser February 22, 2023 at 12:59 PM Interesting piece with a lot to imagine about - enjoyed! Anonomus Scorpio February 22, 2023 at 3:23 PM Thank you Jeff I appreciate you stopping by and checking this one out in particular. Glad you liked it! A.S.

Shirley Hawkins February 19, 2023 at 1:22 AM Your clever monorhyme read like a story of intrigue and willpower. Great read, AS. Take care, Shirley Anonomus Scorpio February 19, 2023 at 6:52 AM Thank you very much Shirley, I am extremely glad you enjoyed this! Warmly A.S.

Constance La France February 18, 2023 at 7:57 AM AS, your poem is deep and dark and wonderfully penned! I get lots of nightmares, so I know this feeling too well, I keep telling myself, it is just a dream ! Blessings, Constance Anonomus Scorpio February 18, 2023 at 8:16 AM Thank you very much Constance for your kind words! I wish you all of the strength to slay your demons! Best Regards A.S.

Sotto Poet February 16, 2023 at 10:27 AM A fantastic poem full of stunning and unique imagery. You also have very high-quality diction. In terms of form, I wouldn't call it free verse but rather a Monorhyme poem. I appreciate your kind words and your visit to my page. The opportunity to talk to you was awesome. Anonomus Scorpio February 16, 2023 at 10:36 AM Your commentary is both humbling and honoring I am very appreciative of your analysis and correction of the form to which I put to this poem. I have revised that to your suggestion. I do struggle at times with how to correctly mark my work. Thank you again for the visit and the critique A.S.