Towel Foul

A lively young lady went down 
To the sea to bathe all unbound,
She took off her suit,
She knew she looked cute,
Soon folks of all ages stood round.

Soaking wet, she went for her towel,
As she neared her smile turned to scowl,
Her towel was not there 
To tie up her hair,
She turned to the crowd and called foul. 








July 31, 2019
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Pettit Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 7:33 PM
nice little double limerick,
Mchattie Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 7:07 PM
With everyone's nose stuck in their smart phone... I'm surprised anyone noticed. Clever poem. Have a great day my friend.
Radke Avatar
August 3, 2019 at 12:16 PM
Ha!! Well said. Thanks for the kind words. Best wishes. Deb
Lamoureux Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 9:27 AM
Poor dear.
Gauthier Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 10:44 PM
Fun limerick, Deb.
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