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Towards Vast Waste Life Flows

As river does, towards vast, waste, life flows, Where he loses his gains, fame, and his name; Birth or growth is a battle, but life grows, Stumbling he goes, to own that nameless aim. Fountain falls with a splash and claims, "I came"; On a mountain, high, the fountain did doze. “My birth had a fall with a Splash...,” we claim; As river does, towards vast, waste, life flows. Amidst battles, struggles, cold hails, life goes, And in the sky west, mourns the dying flame; With no pause, no groan, seaward, river toes, Where he loses his gains, fame, and his name. Rashly I ran, to claim the crown of fame; Broke that illusive crown, and dreams all froze; I groaned wanting tears to cry, with no shame; Birth or growth is a battle, but life grows. To own a home, river runs with no pause; An angel comes with love, a comely dame; In his seaward course she joins, this primrose; Stumbling they flow, to own that nameless aim. Duo toe paddling down, and end this game, Battling down, they go, and this tale they close; “Deep down in the depth of sea” they proclaim, No gains we own; one frame we do compose”. towards vast, waste, life flows. Syllable count: 10 syllables in each line (Ref. howmanysyllables.com) Last line & the Title: five words from the first line March 7, 2021 “Life’s a Struggle – any form – Updated – Poetry Contest”. Contest sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 3/18/2021 6:50:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win with this wonderful poem. love phyl
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Date: 3/11/2021 9:49:00 AM
Newton, congratulations on your win in my Life Struggles challenge with this wonderful Rondeau Redouble (Modified) poem, well done and a really great image _Constance
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 3/13/2021 4:13:00 AM
Thank you for the congrats, Constance!!
Date: 3/10/2021 1:25:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 3/10/2021 6:00:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for your revisit and the congrats!!
Date: 3/8/2021 4:33:00 AM
- I am deeply moved by this writing, Newton ... life is not a dance on roses - but we do the best we can - I am sure this will reach high on the winner list ... best wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 3/8/2021 4:40:00 AM
Such an impressively lovely and sweet comment!! Thank you so much, Anne-Lise.

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