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Tough Contest

I thought I would try this contest
My brain really needs a wake-up jolt
I thought I would try this contest

Then on second thought, I might bolt
No, I will stick to it because
My brain really needs a wake-up jolt

So let me just think, take a pause
Yes, just a pause, then really think
No, I will stick to it because

My brain's cogs have run into a chink
Clear the path, oil the gears, brain please start
Yes, just a pause, then really think

Now is the time to write from the heart
No matter how tough the way just say
Clear the path, oil the gears, brain please start

Almost finished, a few more words, hey!!
I thought I would try this contest
No matter how tough the way~ just say
I thought I would try this contest  


Contest: An Original Teranelle
Sponsor: L. Milton Hankins
Date: May 03, 2022

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2022

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Timothy Ray Date: 5/4/2022 7:15:00 PM absolutely charming, loved every line. have a friend who does this to jolt her muse....discipline is something that never mixed for me with poetry but do admire your voyage into it Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 5/6/2022 3:01:00 AM Thank you, Timothy. I like to just write as well and worry about trying to put it together later or just do a few tweaks and make it better. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Valsa George Date: 5/4/2022 5:15:00 AM Definitely you have taken up the challenge and have clearly succeeded. You have oiled the gears and your brain has made a wonderful start....! All the best in this contest, dear Sara ! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 5/4/2022 1:57:00 PM Thank you for the encouragement, Valsa. I appreciate the time spent here taking time to comment. Sara

Bill Baker Date: 5/3/2022 8:09:00 AM A very challenging form and yet you did it so well! WTG Sara. Have a blessed day, my friend, Bill Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 5/3/2022 9:38:00 AM Thank you, Bill. Thanks for the blessing. I needed one today. Sara

Vijay Pandit Date: 5/3/2022 6:43:00 AM Cleverly spun and executed, Sara. I really liked your innovative approach to this form. You exude a lot of fun through these words. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 5/3/2022 7:32:00 AM Vijay, Thank you. It was fun writing it even though I had to think. Sara

Jeff Kyser Date: 5/3/2022 6:23:00 AM it's like the old days when you had to keep bumping the record player to get it into the next groove, good one :-) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 5/3/2022 7:30:00 AM Jeff, Yes, that poem form is similar to the old record player that is hung up. LOL..Thanks for the laughter. Sara

Tom Cunningham Date: 5/3/2022 5:54:00 AM You rose well to the challenge Sara, hope your week is going well. Tom Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 5/3/2022 7:27:00 AM Tom, So far so good. It could be better if I was a lot younger, but, alas, that is not possible. Thanks for the nice review of my work. Sara

Victor Buhagiar Date: 5/3/2022 5:53:00 AM You had to write an original poem, and this one certainly is. Well done and best for a win. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 5/3/2022 6:52:00 AM Thank you, Victor. I appreciate the uplifting review. Sara