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Touched

A foreign language of touch lingers upon every brush and every finger soft scrolls of wonder gently lain caressing visions and erasing pain Whisp the winds as the candle burns Every inch she rests as her body yearns I kneel down at her alter and prey mounds arising from the East and the West a nocturnal migration of supreme surrender to dwell in such peaks of wealth I behest Eyes lock as a wanted hunger still grows nailed to her body with every movement chose words unspoken in long rolled tongues the hours suffer and I become undone Rivers rush deep in a valley lain low A love, a touch, a need bestowed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/15/2017 8:59:00 PM
I have been a bit under the weather last few days, but I read this a few days ago, and I can tell you this is a fav for me, very romantic!
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Date: 9/12/2017 12:01:00 PM
Such passion friend Tim, well done...
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Date: 9/12/2017 11:08:00 AM
you sweeten the day with this beautiful work, tim... much enjoyed!... huggs
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Date: 9/11/2017 10:46:00 PM
A very lovely piece as always my dear friend, Tim. Thanks for sharing! Free time at school today, so I took a peek here. Good luck always.
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Date: 9/11/2017 6:24:00 PM
So sensuous, Tim. Especially loved the ending couplet.
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Date: 9/11/2017 5:11:00 PM
Wow , very nicely written Tim :)
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Date: 9/11/2017 1:21:00 PM
Wow! Love it, Tim!
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Date: 9/11/2017 12:26:00 PM
Oh so sensual tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/11/2017 11:41:00 AM
smart write!have a great day:)
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Date: 9/11/2017 11:09:00 AM
A touching piece of poetic creation--with love bestowed--well done Tim!
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/11/2017 11:39:00 AM
Thank you kindly Vijay
Date: 9/11/2017 10:01:00 AM
I love how this piece touches on the sensual while maintaining such dignity. Wonderful write x
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Date: 9/11/2017 11:38:00 AM
Thanks so much Thvia
Date: 9/11/2017 9:47:00 AM
Wow, so very sensual Tim, I love it! Fantastic!
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/11/2017 11:38:00 AM
Thank you my friend

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