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Touch the Clouds

Life changes, shifts, moves A young boy looks at the clouds, Seeing possibilities and fantasies Cotton Candy at the fair Castles, horses, and knights Feathers and fingers moving endless Thinking he would like to touch a cloud Life changes, shifts, moves Pushing toward manhood, The teen no longer looks up but out Asking questions aloud and in his mind His future lies before him No longer an illusionist Imagination lends itself to bra size Life changes, shifts made, movements slow The man has seen both sides now The fantasies and the realities The good and the bad, the soft and hard Now, he looks up to see the weather changes The clouds reflect his changing moods Waiting for clouds to cover the sun’s heat Life stabilizes, shifting upward, few moves The elderly man remembers the halcyon days Laying back on the grass holding his girl Alone now, the old man’s memories are uneven Today, he sees his beloved’s face smiling down She is waving to him---His tears are true Again, he longs to touch the clouds

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/8/2015 3:34:00 PM
Carol, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/3/2015 4:16:00 AM
- I want to welcome you to P- Soup, Carol - The friendly words that written today can bear fruit tomorrow - Looking forward to read more poems from you in the future :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/1/2015 10:12:00 PM
Wow, this is an excellent poem, Carol! I've always been fascinated by the passing of time and the changes that come to us as we move through life. You have captured that essence in a most excellent way. A big 7 from me!
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Date: 2/1/2015 1:09:00 PM
Carol, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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