Touch - Sharon's Acrostic

Teasing my senses, awaken my soul,
Obey every command, losing control.
Unspoken words, replaced by pure bliss,
Craving you more, every daring kiss.
Hypnotized by passion, transcendence.

6/28/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gulley Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 11:39 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place placement in my contest. I really enjoyed this beautiful and flowing acrostic. Sharon
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July 11, 2017 at 12:35 PM
Thank you so much Sharon! There are a lot of amazing poems and I am honored you chose mine. Thank you for achknowleding my words. Till the next contest :))) ! xoxo
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2017 at 6:10 PM
Very touching acrostic, great poem great win!
Numb Avatar
July 10, 2017 at 10:39 PM
Thank you!! I'm very excited :) glad you enjoyed!
Smith Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 1:59 PM
Great win ;) ILYSM!!
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July 7, 2017 at 10:32 PM
Love you babe!!! Thank you!
Lorette Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 12:35 PM
Good job on winning! :)
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July 8, 2017 at 11:25 AM
Thank you Alyssa :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 12:33 PM
Wow! Now this is an EXCELLENT example of a true Acrostic, and you even managed to make it rhyme which adds to its brilliance! Congratulations on your very deserving First placement Alexis! This is going into my faves! : )
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July 7, 2017 at 10:32 PM
Your kind and beautiful words full my heart :) thank you so much
Allison Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 11:10 AM
Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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July 7, 2017 at 11:18 AM
Thank you kindly sweet friend :)
Lane Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 9:57 AM
Well done with this romantic acrostic.
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July 7, 2017 at 11:17 AM
Thank you very much :)
Lindley Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 9:19 AM
Congrats on our first place win in Sharon's fine contest!
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July 7, 2017 at 11:11 AM
Thank you so much!!
Gulley Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place Win. I really enjoyed the beautiful flow of your acrostic. Nice write. : ) Thank you for entering.
Numb Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 11:10 AM
Omg I'm so excited!! Thank you so much!! An honor amongst so many artists. Can't wait for the next one!
Williams Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 5:36 AM
So Romantic, beautiful and sensual. Well written - good luck with the contest...Maria
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July 7, 2017 at 12:22 AM
Thank you so much! So happy you enjoyed it :)
Downing  Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 4:52 PM
Enchantingly romantic. Good luck in the contest, this is really done great, I love it :)
Numb Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 10:48 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words good luck!!
Lorette Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 11:48 AM
This is gorgeous Alexis, good luck! I really adored the passionate feeling this poem brings out. :)
Numb Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 1:27 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words. :)
Turner Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 11:34 AM
Very very romantic, Alexis:) Lucky guy!
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June 29, 2017 at 3:54 PM
And yes, you're very lucky lol :p I love you.
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June 29, 2017 at 3:52 PM
Thank you very much, Daniel, that's sweet of you to say :) and thank you for the view and comment!
Smith Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 3:41 PM
No bad at all Daniel :P I'm very lucky
Turner Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 3:03 PM
Excuse me, my bad:) Lucky mate:)
Smith Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 2:47 PM
Yes, I am thanks to God blessing me with such a lovely wife as Alexis :)
Allison Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 4:00 AM
Beautiful flow to your acrostic Alexis and I like the end rhyme - I struggle to do that when I write this form:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Numb Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 10:30 AM
Thank you so much for the view and comment, this is my first contest so I hope I do well :) !
Smith Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 10:20 PM
This is great!! I love the rhyme scheme and flow ;)
Numb Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 11:57 PM
Thanks babe! You inspired it ;)
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