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Soul cries out, ‘touch me’ yet do we, do we or are we too lost, our heart turned to frost? Moments of silence sans thought violence is when we entwine with bliss beats divine. Let thoughts be distilled by our heart, love filled, that every emote springs from God’s bliss boat. Soul cries out, ‘touch me’ that melded we be, in bliss nectar’s flow, here and now aglow! 22-August-2022

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Date: 8/21/2022 10:33:00 PM
You seem to love using this form as you do with quietus. I prefer free verse. Great emotions in this poem.
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Date: 8/21/2022 11:07:00 PM
Yes Victor, I like the Jueju form ~ compact and free flowing

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