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Touch Me-Dusk

Trees
in bloom
with a pink
background so soothing,
may I long ponder, 
fervently contemplate 
each creation that stuns me?  
Why does the stubborn disbeliever
stare at it and show resistance
to believe that all He created isn't real?


I touch the image of the peaceful dusk
and feel much serenity inside, 
thinking of the day life will end...
when I will placidly rest 
as the rose-colored lake;
and if somebody
remembers me,
toss a rose
into
it.


Written by Andrew Crisci
for Nette Onclaud's  contest,
" Touch Me- Count Up And Down Contest "

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/1/2011 8:17:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Nette's fine contest Andrew. Have a lovely Sunday....:)
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Date: 4/29/2011 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations Andrew on your win in Nette's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:45:00 AM
Awesome write ...Congrats Andrew on your win in this contest. gautami
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:45:00 AM
Wonderful write Andrew !Congrats on your well deserved win---kash
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Date: 4/28/2011 10:08:00 AM
I would bless you with an entire bouquet of roses, Andrew. What a beautiful poem! Congratulations on your win in Nette's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/28/2011 5:04:00 AM
Congrats Andrew on your great win in Nette's contest with this lovely delight and exquisite entry my friend.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..
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Date: 4/28/2011 3:34:00 AM
thought provoking poem on life, Andrew -- Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 4/27/2011 11:13:00 PM
cheers to your happy win in my contest, andrew! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/27/2011 7:08:00 PM
Congratulation Andrew on your success in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:10:00 AM
Nice write, good luck in the contest.
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