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Touch- Sharon's Acrostic

Tears fall from the rose, On autumn's eve her sadness grows Under a sky painted gray Crimson petals take to the wind Her beauty hushed by autumn's chill 6/26/17

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Daniel Turner

Date: 7/7/2017 6:11:00 PM

Congratulations Joseph on your win. It is a very beautiful acrostic.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/7/2017 2:16:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/7/2017 9:45:00 AM

EXCEPTIONAL VERSES MY FRIEND.. Congrats on your fine win.. Beautiful imagery and message..

Sharon Gulley

Date: 7/7/2017 9:01:00 AM

A lovely write and read Joseph. Thank you so much for entering my contest with this lovely acrostic. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. : )

Joseph May
Date: 7/7/2017 10:54:00 AM

Thank you so much for my placement Sharon

Jeremy Smith

Date: 7/1/2017 7:25:00 PM

Great job Joseph :) Good luck in the contest I hope to see both our names on the winner's list!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/30/2017 11:02:00 AM

I think that a contest must be going on..I haven't looked at contest in a very long time so don't know for sure..This is a good one and probably will be in the winner's circle..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Akkina Downing

Date: 6/29/2017 7:12:00 PM

Breathtaking... my, this one is going into my fave. i LOVE it! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2017 12:13:00 PM

Gorgeous!!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/26/2017 11:11:00 PM

Sadly beautiful, Joseph, a winner for me:)

John Hamilton

Date: 6/26/2017 4:20:00 PM

Wonderful writing Joseph! Succinct but so full of meaning, I see a winner here!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/26/2017 10:46:00 AM

Beautiful but such a sad acrostic Jospeh. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/26/2017 10:34:00 AM

really nice acrostic, Joseph. I see it clearly!

Paul Callus

Date: 6/26/2017 10:01:00 AM

A beautiful Acrostic, Joseph; sadness is often a fitting tool for enviable poetry! // paul

Maria Williams

Date: 6/26/2017 8:23:00 AM

A lovely and sad piece Joseph - but we forever live in the excitement of the next seasons bloom - PS - You would have loved the Rose garden we saw in Japan - Spectacular with a message. I wrote about it in 'A Rose by any other name...' Maria

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/26/2017 8:11:00 AM

This is beautiful, clear and sad . Well done Joseph.