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Touch - Sharon's Acrostic

Teasing my senses, awaken my soul, Obey every command, losing control. Unspoken words, replaced by pure bliss, Craving you more, every daring kiss. Hypnotized by passion, transcendence. 6/28/2017

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Sharon Gulley

Date: 7/11/2017 11:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your 1st place placement in my contest. I really enjoyed this beautiful and flowing acrostic. Sharon

Poetically Numb
Date: 7/11/2017 12:35:00 PM

Thank you so much Sharon! There are a lot of amazing poems and I am honored you chose mine. Thank you for achknowleding my words. Till the next contest :))) ! xoxo

John Hamilton

Date: 7/10/2017 6:10:00 PM

Very touching acrostic, great poem great win!

Poetically Numb
Date: 7/10/2017 10:39:00 PM

Thank you!! I'm very excited :) glad you enjoyed!

Jeremy Smith

Date: 7/7/2017 1:59:00 PM

Great win ;) ILYSM!!

Poetically Numb
Date: 7/7/2017 10:32:00 PM

Love you babe!!! Thank you!

Alyssa Lorette

Date: 7/7/2017 12:35:00 PM

Good job on winning! :)

Poetically Numb
Date: 7/8/2017 11:25:00 AM

Thank you Alyssa :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/7/2017 12:33:00 PM

Wow! Now this is an EXCELLENT example of a true Acrostic, and you even managed to make it rhyme which adds to its brilliance! Congratulations on your very deserving First placement Alexis! This is going into my faves! : )

Poetically Numb
Date: 7/7/2017 10:32:00 PM

Your kind and beautiful words full my heart :) thank you so much

Jan Allison

Date: 7/7/2017 11:10:00 AM

Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Poetically Numb
Date: 7/7/2017 11:18:00 AM

Thank you kindly sweet friend :)

Lin Lane

Date: 7/7/2017 9:57:00 AM

Well done with this romantic acrostic.

Poetically Numb
Date: 7/7/2017 11:17:00 AM

Thank you very much :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/7/2017 9:19:00 AM

Congrats on our first place win in Sharon's fine contest!

Poetically Numb
Date: 7/7/2017 11:11:00 AM

Thank you so much!!

Sharon Gulley

Date: 7/7/2017 8:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your 1st place Win. I really enjoyed the beautiful flow of your acrostic. Nice write. : ) Thank you for entering.

Poetically Numb
Date: 7/7/2017 11:10:00 AM

Omg I'm so excited!! Thank you so much!! An honor amongst so many artists. Can't wait for the next one!

Maria Williams

Date: 7/6/2017 5:36:00 AM

So Romantic, beautiful and sensual. Well written - good luck with the contest...Maria

Poetically Numb
Date: 7/7/2017 12:22:00 AM

Thank you so much! So happy you enjoyed it :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 6/30/2017 4:52:00 PM

Enchantingly romantic. Good luck in the contest, this is really done great, I love it :)

Poetically Numb
Date: 7/1/2017 10:48:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words good luck!!

Alyssa Lorette

Date: 6/30/2017 11:48:00 AM

This is gorgeous Alexis, good luck! I really adored the passionate feeling this poem brings out. :)

Poetically Numb
Date: 6/30/2017 1:27:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words. :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/29/2017 11:34:00 AM

Very very romantic, Alexis:) Lucky guy!

Poetically Numb
Date: 6/29/2017 3:54:00 PM

And yes, you're very lucky lol :p I love you.

Poetically Numb
Date: 6/29/2017 3:52:00 PM

Thank you very much, Daniel, that's sweet of you to say :) and thank you for the view and comment!

Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/29/2017 3:41:00 PM

No bad at all Daniel :P I'm very lucky

Daniel Turner
Date: 6/29/2017 3:03:00 PM

Excuse me, my bad:) Lucky mate:)

Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/29/2017 2:47:00 PM

Yes, I am thanks to God blessing me with such a lovely wife as Alexis :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/29/2017 4:00:00 AM

Beautiful flow to your acrostic Alexis and I like the end rhyme - I struggle to do that when I write this form:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Poetically Numb
Date: 6/29/2017 10:30:00 AM

Thank you so much for the view and comment, this is my first contest so I hope I do well :) !

Jeremy Smith

Date: 6/28/2017 10:20:00 PM

This is great!! I love the rhyme scheme and flow ;)

Poetically Numb
Date: 6/28/2017 11:57:00 PM

Thanks babe! You inspired it ;)