Tortured Undead

The nightly rattle heard down the hall,
The shadow form of a man stands tall.
The sound of chains strike fear to my heart.
His chance long past, he cannot depart.
Seeking my soul, he desires my fall.

His pain, I can feel, for after all,
He heeded not Heaven's urgent call,
But let his anguished form to impart
The forever torture of rattling chains.

The nightly rattle heard down the hall
Plays with my mind's sense of rationale.
Are eyes weary, or do shadows dart
To whittle the years on my life's chart?
Soulless, he yearns for the sensual,
   Yet--
The forever torture of rattling chains.

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Date: 10/25/2024 10:55:00 AM
Rattling chains, a good write for Halloween and scrooge. Fabulous job.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/25/2024 8:16:00 PM
I'm pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you.
Date: 10/15/2024 6:33:00 AM
Spooky. The spirit would become a forever angry rattle of chains.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/15/2024 9:27:00 AM
Yes, and no chance for sleep at night. Thank you for enjoying this.
Date: 10/13/2024 9:52:00 PM
Your poem suits to the spirit of Halloween. The rattling sound of chains at night is especially frightful. The shadow form of man seen at night sends terror down my spine.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/14/2024 7:12:00 AM
A Happy Halloween to you. Thank you for commenting.
Date: 10/13/2024 3:14:00 AM
The forever torture of rattling chains A symphony of Halloween that rattles the soul and leaves it in Ecstasy. Great emotion.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/13/2024 6:35:00 AM
Thank you for the compliment. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 10/13/2024 12:37:00 AM
I wasnt ready for Halloween just yet, I am now! xoxo
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/13/2024 2:41:00 AM
I wait all year for Halloween. I hope you enjoy this year's celebration. Thank you for your comment.
Date: 10/12/2024 8:19:00 PM
Yet-- The forever torture of rattling chains…that is what one gets for living his way…a short life…forever chained. Great!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/12/2024 8:54:00 PM
Just another of my Halloween poems before October ends. Thank you for commenting.
Date: 10/12/2024 12:31:00 PM
Yep, such soul hunger never knows rest. A spooky delight.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/12/2024 12:58:00 PM
I'm thrilled that you like it. Have a fun Halloween.
Date: 10/12/2024 6:10:00 AM
A tortured soul with no hope in sight, Very nicely penned
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/12/2024 6:19:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 10/12/2024 3:05:00 AM
Oh this is a chilling scary one Hilda - A thing that nightmares are made of. Very suited to Halloween. Maria
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/12/2024 6:18:00 AM
I look forward to Halloween and to writing scary poems. I like your comment.
Date: 10/11/2024 8:06:00 PM
Whoah this is heavy and scary- the rhyme flowed very well
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/11/2024 9:39:00 PM
This is scary. I write these ones during October. Thanks for reading and Happy Halloween.
Date: 10/11/2024 6:50:00 PM
What is Halloween, without a good scare? Though it gave me chills, I enjoyed yours, Hilda. :0
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/11/2024 6:56:00 PM
I don't want to scare you too much. I hope there is a little holiday chuckle. Best wishes to you for a lovely autumn season.
Date: 10/10/2024 8:29:00 PM
Hilda, I implore you - resist this tortured shadow! Great poem!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/10/2024 8:51:00 PM
Thanks again. These ghosts remind me of all the motels/hotels that are said to be haunted.
Date: 10/10/2024 5:43:00 PM
oh gee Hilda the imagery gave me the creeps - i will worry if i hear rattling chains! hugs Jan xx
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/10/2024 6:21:00 PM
Thank you for daring to read this one. I hope everyone has a happy Halloween. Thanks for the ccomment.
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