Tortured Undead

The nightly rattle heard down the hall,
The shadow form of a man stands tall.
The sound of chains strike fear to my heart.
His chance long past, he cannot depart.
Seeking my soul, he desires my fall.

His pain, I can feel, for after all,
He heeded not Heaven's urgent call,
But let his anguished form to impart
The forever torture of rattling chains.

The nightly rattle heard down the hall
Plays with my mind's sense of rationale.
Are eyes weary, or do shadows dart
To whittle the years on my life's chart?
Soulless, he yearns for the sensual,
   Yet--
The forever torture of rattling chains.
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Leach Avatar
October 25, 2024 at 10:55 AM
Rattling chains, a good write for Halloween and scrooge. Fabulous job.
Greenhough Avatar
October 25, 2024 at 8:16 PM
I'm pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 6:33 AM
Spooky. The spirit would become a forever angry rattle of chains.
Greenhough Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 9:27 AM
Yes, and no chance for sleep at night. Thank you for enjoying this.
George Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 9:52 PM
Your poem suits to the spirit of Halloween. The rattling sound of chains at night is especially frightful. The shadow form of man seen at night sends terror down my spine.
Greenhough Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 7:12 AM
A Happy Halloween to you. Thank you for commenting.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 3:14 AM
The forever torture of rattling chains A symphony of Halloween that rattles the soul and leaves it in Ecstasy. Great emotion.
Greenhough Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 6:35 AM
Thank you for the compliment. I'm glad you liked it.
Severo Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 12:37 AM
I wasnt ready for Halloween just yet, I am now! xoxo
Greenhough Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 2:41 AM
I wait all year for Halloween. I hope you enjoy this year's celebration. Thank you for your comment.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 8:19 PM
Yet-- The forever torture of rattling chains…that is what one gets for living his way…a short life…forever chained. Great!
Greenhough Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 8:54 PM
Just another of my Halloween poems before October ends. Thank you for commenting.
DiMino Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 12:31 PM
Yep, such soul hunger never knows rest. A spooky delight.
Greenhough Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 12:58 PM
I'm thrilled that you like it. Have a fun Halloween.
May Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 6:10 AM
A tortured soul with no hope in sight, Very nicely penned
Greenhough Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 6:19 AM
Thank you.
Williams Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 3:05 AM
Oh this is a chilling scary one Hilda - A thing that nightmares are made of. Very suited to Halloween. Maria
Greenhough Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 6:18 AM
I look forward to Halloween and to writing scary poems. I like your comment.
Hind Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 8:06 PM
Whoah this is heavy and scary- the rhyme flowed very well
Greenhough Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 9:39 PM
This is scary. I write these ones during October. Thanks for reading and Happy Halloween.
Buehler Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 6:50 PM
What is Halloween, without a good scare? Though it gave me chills, I enjoyed yours, Hilda. :0
Greenhough Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 6:56 PM
I don't want to scare you too much. I hope there is a little holiday chuckle. Best wishes to you for a lovely autumn season.
Crandall Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 8:29 PM
Hilda, I implore you - resist this tortured shadow! Great poem!
Greenhough Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 8:51 PM
Thanks again. These ghosts remind me of all the motels/hotels that are said to be haunted.
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 5:43 PM
oh gee Hilda the imagery gave me the creeps - i will worry if i hear rattling chains! hugs Jan xx
Greenhough Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 6:21 PM
Thank you for daring to read this one. I hope everyone has a happy Halloween. Thanks for the ccomment.
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