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Torn In Two

When we met everything was bright and new, And everyday our new relationship grew, Finally all of my dreams had come true, But one day my heart was torn in two, For you were not who I thought I knew, How could this happen without a clue, A hidden side has given me a different view, My heart no longer beats as it used to, It's never again, happy and forever blue, Throbbing no longer red, but a blue-violet hue, It cannot be mended with stitches and glue, Now that you're gone, what will I do, And thinking that I was sick with the flu, When, actually I was just sick of you. Written by: Kelly Deschler motif: philosophical

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/16/2014 3:47:00 PM
I love your writing Kelly. I'm new on poetrysoup and enjoy reading all these great poetry.love the poem. warm regards "B"
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/22/2014 1:47:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments. I appreciate them very much! I'm glad that you're enjoying Poetry Soup. It is a great place to discover wonderful poets and poems. It's always nice for us to see new faces, everyone is welcome here!
Date: 3/10/2014 5:55:00 AM
Very Wonderful write. Congrats on the win, kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/12/2014 6:07:00 PM
Thank you once again, Dr. Ram. I appreciate you stopping by. I am happy that you enjoyed my poem! :)
Date: 3/10/2014 1:19:00 AM
very deep Kelly, awesome win. ~ Love ~ SKAT
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/12/2014 5:41:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by, SKAT. I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem! :)
Date: 3/10/2014 12:51:00 AM
Masterful poetic stroke, showing the ambivalence of the moment. Grats! CTB
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/12/2014 5:31:00 PM
Thank you very much, Christopher. I always appreciate your kind visits! Your comments really meant a lot to me. :)
Date: 3/9/2014 4:33:00 PM
- A wonderful poem posted for Giorgio A.V. contest - "Impress me with a small poem III" - Congratulations on your win, Kelly !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/11/2014 7:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise! It's always good to see you stopping by. I appreciate it very much! :)
Date: 12/7/2013 11:50:00 PM
Kelly Such a relatable and emotional write. It tugs at the heartstrings of everyone who has ever dealt with someone lying, cheating, two faced or just hiding their true self. Nice job Thanks for the awesome comment on my Without Your Friendship poem Hugs
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Date: 11/5/2013 6:24:00 PM
i think most everyone can relate to this piece....so much truth in your words... we don't always realize how bad someone makes us feel until they are gone...as they say love is blind....enjoyed this one Kelly :)
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Date: 10/15/2013 10:49:00 PM
I like this one. It's got a simple style but is heartfelt. Never dull reading your poems.
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Date: 10/10/2013 5:31:00 PM
You know that I really understand what you're writing about. A lot of my work centers around your theme here. Discovering love, then discovering deception can write many songs..... Great writing, sweetheart.... I've not written much lately due to pacemaker implant along with the loss of a precious pet has robbed me of my inspiration. I'm feeling much better, so I will hopefully get back in the groove... Thanks for your encouraging visits.... Love ya dearly.... Jake
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Date: 10/5/2013 7:38:00 PM
Wow I'm glad you really didn't have the flu lol enjoyed reading your write all pon aside thank you for reading my jack the ripper it's one of my favorites two.
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Date: 9/17/2013 12:23:00 AM
Totally relate to that, wordsmiths, a smooth surface covering dirt and grime....Beautifully expressed Kelly.....Herzel
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Date: 9/16/2013 11:36:00 AM
Cute ending to this one..Kind of a surprise..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/15/2013 4:16:00 PM
Someone who hides behind a mask until finally the truth is revealed. I can relate to this Kelly. Lovely.
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Date: 9/14/2013 11:22:00 AM
THIS FEELING I KNOW SO WELL GOD BLESS BEAUTIFUL PIECE
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Date: 9/14/2013 7:50:00 AM
Seems in the beginning many conceal their true self in order to attain their desire. It begins to unravel when the 'real' persona is revealed little by little.
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Date: 9/13/2013 7:50:00 PM
I know exactly how you feel. It is a heart wrenching feeling when for so long you feel so right. Then suddenly it hits you that nothing is right at all. I went threw this same situation. I felt like i wasted so much time. As painful as it was i fel so much better now that its all over.
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Date: 9/13/2013 7:32:00 PM
Hi Kelly, it always sounds good at first... this kind of reminds me of my x-fiance.. he managed to indulge me with love. after 5 years of living together, I found out he was married... I was like wow!!! He was not the man I thought he was... my heart in two... LOL, like you I got sick of his lies. He's the reason I found the soup. haha~ enjoyed this one... xox Linda
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