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Torn Apart

I’ve let you tear me apart piece by piece hoping you find something you like. But you never did. You tore till you had no more to tear and then you left me laying in a heap of pieces. Every part of me broken. Every part of me was given to you in hope that maybe Someday I could be the one to please you. But I wasn’t. Now I’m starting to see maybe that was okay. I watch as you and her laugh and smile together I wonder how long it will be until you end up hurting her just like you did to me. I wonder how long How long until you to start tearing her apart until nothing is left. And when that day comes I’ll cry for her because she saw you as perfect. I saw you as perfect. but you proved me wrong. I wish to god I wasn’t. But I guess I should have known not to trust you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/12/2017 12:35:00 AM
I am really sorry this happened to you, and this poem, although so very well written, speaks of such a deep sadness... Welcome to PoetrySoup.
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Date: 4/11/2017 9:26:00 PM
I always say trust is a gamble. You have to take time with people but even when you think you know them, they surprise you. Good poem George and welcome to poetry soup!
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