Torn

Should I be so selfish, 

so as if not to see, 

the brutality, 

the vengeance, 

that stands before me, 

staring me, 

dead in the eyes, 

but what can I do, 

to speak out, 

to show you, 

I care.


I know you sit, 

and wonder why, 

all of your loved ones, 

must suffer this way, 

wonder, 

how, 

in the world we live in today, 

this tragic, 

lack of respect, 

for peace to all mankind, 

could even take place.  


To be inside the mind of another, 

to see what it's like, 

from the other side, 

the woes that I have, 

could never begin to compare, 

to the life you must live, 

day after day.  


Misery, 

Deception, 

the eyes of rejection, 

peering down, 

don't lash out, 

or make a sound, 

they'll let this happen, 

but they don't want you, 

to scream and shout, 

to rattle the crowd.  


It would be so great, 

if we could all become one, 

and help one another, 

to end all of this pain, 

and to discover, 

a light, 

and voice from deep within, 

to show us, 

where to begin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 28, 2016 at 11:24 PM
Brittany Bigelow, awesome poem. LINDA
Freeman Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 12:21 PM
Thanks for reading my poetry,jm
Bigelow Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 6:07 AM
Thank you for your warm welcome Deborah! :)
Guzzi Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 5:55 AM
welcome to the soup! Light & Love
Bigelow Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 5:49 AM
Thank you Carol, there is plenty more to come, be sure to check back. :)
Brown Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 5:36 AM
Wow what a fantastic first poem posted by you here at PoetrySoup. Welcome to PoetrySoup Brittany. Outstanding writng. Love, Carol
Bigelow Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 9:27 PM
That was the message I was trying to portray. Thanks for your warm welcome, and I'll be sure to check out your poems. :)
Freeman Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 4:54 PM
The light is available, but you must desire it more than the world's goods. MAY God bless, WELCOME TO SOUP, CHECK MY POEMS OUT,SEE WHAT YOU THINK!
Bigelow Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 8:09 AM
Nice point Sara, Thank you for your comment! :)
Kendrick Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 3:18 AM
Interesting write. It all begins with one. That is each person. That is all we can change. Sara
Bigelow Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 10:41 AM
Thank you James!
Fraser Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 10:32 AM
Lovely write Brittany. a warm welcome to the Soup to you>>James
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