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Torn

Should I be so selfish, so as if not to see, the brutality, the vengeance, that stands before me, staring me, dead in the eyes, but what can I do, to speak out, to show you, I care. I know you sit, and wonder why, all of your loved ones, must suffer this way, wonder, how, in the world we live in today, this tragic, lack of respect, for peace to all mankind, could even take place. To be inside the mind of another, to see what it's like, from the other side, the woes that I have, could never begin to compare, to the life you must live, day after day. Misery, Deception, the eyes of rejection, peering down, don't lash out, or make a sound, they'll let this happen, but they don't want you, to scream and shout, to rattle the crowd. It would be so great, if we could all become one, and help one another, to end all of this pain, and to discover, a light, and voice from deep within, to show us, where to begin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/28/2016 11:24:00 PM
Brittany Bigelow, awesome poem. LINDA
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Date: 7/13/2009 12:21:00 PM
Thanks for reading my poetry,jm
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Date: 7/13/2009 6:07:00 AM
Thank you for your warm welcome Deborah! :)
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Date: 7/13/2009 5:55:00 AM
welcome to the soup! Light & Love
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Date: 7/13/2009 5:49:00 AM
Thank you Carol, there is plenty more to come, be sure to check back. :)
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Date: 7/13/2009 5:36:00 AM
Wow what a fantastic first poem posted by you here at PoetrySoup. Welcome to PoetrySoup Brittany. Outstanding writng. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2009 9:27:00 PM
That was the message I was trying to portray. Thanks for your warm welcome, and I'll be sure to check out your poems. :)
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Date: 7/12/2009 4:54:00 PM
The light is available, but you must desire it more than the world's goods. MAY God bless, WELCOME TO SOUP, CHECK MY POEMS OUT,SEE WHAT YOU THINK!
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Date: 7/12/2009 8:09:00 AM
Nice point Sara, Thank you for your comment! :)
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Date: 7/12/2009 3:18:00 AM
Interesting write. It all begins with one. That is each person. That is all we can change. Sara
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Date: 7/11/2009 10:41:00 AM
Thank you James!
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Date: 7/11/2009 10:32:00 AM
Lovely write Brittany. a warm welcome to the Soup to you>>James
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