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Top Brass Go For the Gold (Faster Is Better In Vancouver 2010)

Athlete kabob meat to skewer Olympic games meet the sewer Those ratings too flat Create new dangers that Pander to the TV viewer

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2010 9:07:00 PM

Hey, Duke, this one I don't really get too much since I have absolutely no interest in most sports or the olympics, but I think your rhythm of this particular limerick is nearly spot on. What you said about my "indian" poem (I know the names of their tribes are preferred!): it's not worth much, but my great great grandma was CHerokee, Rachael Love her name. I have that INdian nose! Luv, Andrea ps. I LOVE their way with nature. That's why I loved the Avatar movie, Check out my Avatar poem!

Marty Owens

Date: 2/15/2010 3:05:00 PM

Very funny...all your Libericks are very good...Enjoy them...Marty

John Freeman

Date: 2/15/2010 12:42:00 PM

Cool rhyming Duk. Sincerely, Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/15/2010 7:49:00 AM

Limerick is well written. I haven't watched the games so I don't know what is going on with the tv shows. I am sure that they were entertaining. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Susan Palli

Date: 2/14/2010 7:23:00 AM

good rhyme