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Too Soon

“It was too soon…” I ripped the words from my mouth, And from the look given, I felt the obligation to comfort him further But he demanded nothing In his eyes was all that was in him, broken Just as all that was in me, lost. I tried to find him again, Forgetting my own confusion, Forgetting that I too ached for something missing— Something gone. Just as he dies, I also die. …. I walked away, ashamed, Knowing that his loved one will live again. “Too soon”, I muttered to myself, All things give homage to time Just as all things must die. Too soon— Too soon do we give up. Too soon do we cut each other short We stop being real with all these feelings, And forget to utter the healing truths That resurrect hope.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/16/2016 8:50:00 PM
Sharing the burden of someone else's pain is never easy, too soon, too late, in retrospect, we do the best we can yet still become lost in our affectations.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/4/2016 3:29:00 AM
<3 Yes, couldn't have said it any better. ~Laura
Date: 11/15/2016 12:01:00 PM
Inbetween the sorrow and shambles of lost and broken companions a raw building material presents the pale heart with the blood warmth of unforgotten kisses Poetess...I admire this poem's simplicity, brevity, and honesty Laura...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 11/15/2016 3:35:00 PM
Thank you for reading, Justin. I always appreciate your thoughts..I am learning to be more real, because the further I stray from the truth, the more lost I will become.. <3~Laura
Date: 11/14/2016 3:48:00 PM
Filled with deep and painful emotion, i like how the poem splits into 2 halves, lovely write, warm regards, Laura.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 11/15/2016 3:32:00 PM
Thanks, Laura. <3 I appreciate the visit and your thoughts. <3~Laura

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