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i'm allmost afraid to ask it's almost none of my business but when it comes to you my love it becomes a time for kindness the secrets you won't tell me seem to threaghten to take you away now so it seems that it may happen anyday either i forgot to ask or you forgot to mintion what's really going on what has our curious attention no, it won't chase me away no matter your condition i love you any way you are and that is our tradition like those married for a long time we have been commisioned we love each other forever no matter our condition i have a fairy godfather who loves me very much he can change your situation with one single touch close your eye's and just believe in something loving us and just as surely as you believe try very hard to trust and if thing's don't workout the way you want them too perhaps there is something better for both me and you we shouldn't question wisdom or ever doubt true love but still we'll search for sympathy from a place up above find peace in gaining patience is often part of the plan and when your much much older by then you'll understand

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Date: 3/23/2012 4:43:00 PM
No doubt about it, your poetry ranks high in my book, great story and such great rhyme.
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Date: 11/21/2011 5:24:00 AM
Beautiful words written...luv shannon
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Date: 11/19/2011 10:22:00 AM
Dear John, thanks for your comments on my poem about the scattered ashes. I'm not surprised you could relate to it as well. I hope you find joy and peace when you celebrate Thanksgiving this year. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 11/18/2011 12:28:00 AM
just drop by and took a pause here after reading your poetry. beautiful...
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Date: 11/10/2011 8:52:00 AM
A very, 'Dramatic Verse' dear poet ! Flat out wisdom sir ! TY for sharing this instructional write. Have a wonderful week....much love, james
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Date: 11/9/2011 4:02:00 PM
I'm not keeping any secrets from you...I replied to soup mail but don't know if you saw it...and fyi no I don't wear glasses, I see all too clearly as it is...
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Date: 11/9/2011 8:23:00 PM
don't wear glasses. that's why you can get all your colors right!
Date: 11/9/2011 11:51:00 AM
A poem that comes from the heart filled with feeling. Thank you dear friend on your wishes for our new grandson Aaron. We are truly blessed. love phyl
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Date: 11/9/2011 6:35:00 AM
good morning john... I came to read the poem.... You must have had removed it... anyway about this poEm, you lost me at the ending... But your words touched,my heart... I'm a very hard person to understand.. I wish my kids would open up with me.. And seek God in their hearts... Enjoyed..p.d
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Date: 11/8/2011 11:37:00 AM
Some folks find it difficult to open up and actually allow love to enter their hearts, John. It takes a little coaxing sometimes. If this was written about someone you know, I hope you have shared it with her. She will see the love in your heart. Please send me your address so I can mail a Christmas card to you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/8/2011 7:12:00 AM
Beautiful! I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem! ----Lori
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