Get Your Premium Membership

Too Much Relief Man

When stress about work started showing He smoked some of what he was growing Showed up at work No pants or shirt Not sure if he was coming or going! His stress he still managed to be numbing Even though dismissal was forthcoming He said, "It's cool man," "I'll live in my van," As to his boss, his nose he was thumbing!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/23/2020 10:00:00 AM
A minute for a funny. Thanks, Pat!
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Pat Adams
Date: 1/24/2020 3:00:00 PM
Thank YOU, for commenting SW!!.................80)
Date: 1/3/2020 9:18:00 PM
G'day PAT … proof that man can float in a carefree world. All one needs is sun, water, fertilizer, and be on guard - catch you soon Pat - Lindsay
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Pat Adams
Date: 1/5/2020 7:25:00 AM
That's true. Hard to get chicks that way though! If you want to be a chicken farmer, I mean. Yeah, that's what I meant!..................80)
Date: 12/28/2019 5:23:00 PM
Too bad he didn't give his boss some 'special' brownies - maybe they could both be up in the clouds :)
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Pat Adams
Date: 12/29/2019 7:04:00 AM
Hmmmm.....That's a good point! I mean, what do you mean brownies?........80)
Date: 12/27/2019 7:11:00 PM
Sounds about right.
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Pat Adams
Date: 12/28/2019 3:51:00 PM
I'm only guessing of course!.........80)
Date: 12/27/2019 5:27:00 PM
At least he did not gape a vape! Aloha! Rico
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Pat Adams
Date: 12/28/2019 3:50:00 PM
Yeah, not cool man!.....80)
Date: 12/26/2019 7:48:00 PM
Ha ha, cute and funny!
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Pat Adams
Date: 12/27/2019 2:23:00 PM
Thanks Tania. I think I'm somewhat of an acquired taste!......pat
Date: 12/26/2019 7:45:00 PM
Cute one, Pat! Hippie-ai-ay! ~ gw
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Pat Adams
Date: 12/27/2019 2:22:00 PM
Well once in a while you have to acknowledge the rebels! (I'm not sure why)...............80)

Book: Shattered Sighs