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Too Many Valentines

There was a man of unsurpassed charm Who never wanted a lady to harm Valentine card wished to buy His “unique” love, not make cry Thus cards, for a dozen girls, bought the bum! © Demetrios Trifiatis 13 FEBRUARY 2015

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Angie Thomas

Date: 2/16/2015 3:33:00 AM

I once read a book about one such bum! But someday, his world of lies will come crashing down =) a nice poem =)

Angie Thomas

Date: 2/16/2015 3:31:00 AM

I once read a book about one such bum! But someday, his world of lies will come crashing down =) a nice poem =)

Paul Callus

Date: 2/14/2015 1:37:00 PM

That's what I call 'bulk-buying', Demi!! ...but he who plays with fire will get his fingers burnt...especially on Valentine's Day! // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/14/2015 1:45:00 PM

Absolutely true my friend, Paul! I hope they will learn from their mistakes! Thank you! Do you receive messages from PS? I do not and don't know why! Please let me know!

Eve Roper

Date: 2/13/2015 10:53:00 PM

Well, at least he was trying to be kind to more than one woman. :) He was a bum :( Happy Valentine's Eve

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/14/2015 12:17:00 AM

Thank you ,Eve. I am certain you are going to have a Valentine full of love!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/13/2015 10:19:00 PM

You brought a smile to my face, Demetrios...even a charming man can only juggle so many Valentines! :) Hugs, Rhonda

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/14/2015 12:20:00 AM

Rhonda, my dear, happy am I that a smile have brought to your face! Hope on Valentne's you will have more reasons to smile! Thank you for visiting and commenting!

Tim Smith

Date: 2/13/2015 9:45:00 AM

Offer your heart to only one my friend and be true to her

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/13/2015 10:18:00 AM

"Your advise is directed to the wrong man, dear Tim! This is just a humorous Limerick! Haven't you understood that I satirize those who have many valentines, Tim?