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Too Fast

Watching the leaves fall, Dreading the end of summer. Seasons flee too fast.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/9/2010 3:16:00 PM
yes they do,,lol,, it was just summer and it passed me by,..p.d.
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Date: 8/21/2010 11:23:00 AM
In Scotland, it feels as if we have moved from Spring into Autumn. And yes, the seasons do pass so fast >> James
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Date: 8/15/2010 7:33:00 PM
Very good and so true
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Date: 8/15/2010 5:41:00 AM
very good entry Francine... best of luck to you...always Michael
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Date: 8/14/2010 9:49:00 PM
It depends where you live. Here, in Southern California I miss the four seasons of my childhood. ...or maybe I forgot the coolness of winter...
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Date: 8/14/2010 7:36:00 PM
Especially Summer Francine.. hate to see the heat go .. a wonderful realistic Haiku..good luck if for any contest.. enjoyed.. happy weekend..with luv..
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Date: 8/14/2010 5:30:00 PM
A nice write on the transition of seasons, Francine
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Date: 8/14/2010 4:35:00 PM
Smile ~ "Very Pretty Picture Here Dear & Never Worry For, 'Beauty Shall Always Surround Beauty!!!'" ~ "My Love & Warmth Always to You & Your Loves," John! ~ Smile, "Have The Most Beautiful of Evenings Dear Francine Roberts, Wrapped in The Warmth of Mid Summer Nights Love;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 8/14/2010 4:30:00 PM
Smile ~ "What is there to fear, but fear itself." ~ Take for example the Martyrs; giving their lives sometimes within excruciating fashions in exchange for an eternal hope....Smile, I guess they call that "Faith" ~ Smile, "I Love The Beautiful Depth & Reflections of Your Priceless Soul Dear Francine;" almost always so very clearly apparent amid "Your Gifted Verse" ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 8/14/2010 4:24:00 PM
Smile ~ "What A Lovely & Somewhat Deep Write Dear Gifted & Precious Francine Roberts;" and I do agree with Carolyn below for seasons often do seem to come and go so very quickly ~ And yet for myself actually dear, Autumn has Always been my very favourite season of all; given the holidays and so forth ~ And also this write causes myself to consider an old saying for some reason ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 8/14/2010 4:15:00 PM
Gets faster as we get older seems like..Great write..Enjoyed the read..Sara
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Date: 8/14/2010 3:13:00 PM
The older we get, the faster the seasons seem to spin past. Visit me in Florida where it's like summer 9 months of the year, Francine! Or maybe I can just send some sunshine your way. Enjoyed your haiku! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/14/2010 2:59:00 PM
Great Haiku with great imagery Francine...Larry
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