Too Bright a Journey
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The train popped from the tunnel into bright
Like stuffed cork from a bottle of champagne
And tho' my eyes tried blinking 'way the light
The dazzled sun upon my gaze brought pain
Too far now since I'd known ... the soothe of rain.
Written and submitted on December 3, 2019
For the "Five Word Challenge" Poetry Contest
Beth Evans, Sponsor.
Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden | Year Posted 2019
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