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Too Bad

Too bad Adam didn't have a mother or a sister, a neighbor, a friend, enemy, or even just a guy he didn't know but waved at anyway. Adam dealt with what he did have which was Eve. Too bad for Eve, too. She didn't have a father. She had Adam's rib, though, at least that was something. Adam thought Eve was pretty and he liked the idea of someone who'd feed him. Eve thought Adam was not too bad lookin' his own self... … and he DID have a way with words (giraffe made her laugh) !!! like really hard !!! like sometimes she had to run to a corner of Eden to pee !!! Stuff didn't always go great for them, but they loved eachother.

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Date: 12/27/2011 10:11:00 AM
hilarious!
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Date: 12/27/2011 7:51:00 AM
And Ocelot. Loved this Nancy.
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Date: 12/27/2011 4:49:00 AM
Crazy life was even then,, oh..! what can we do..?
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Date: 12/26/2011 8:07:00 PM
adam didnt have a mother, eve mothered cain n abel, cain killed abel made em blubber, cain got a shiela from the stable, one of them hairy cousins,, where me rhesus monkey blood come from??? but me tail just donr get a gripp...
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Nancy Jones
Date: 12/26/2011 8:24:00 PM
I love you and you just might be an asshole, too!

Book: Shattered Sighs