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Tomorrow Isn't Real

Like in a fantasy; my wildest dream came true. For the moment we kissed, I fell in love with you. Turning hope into love, you knew just how to please. And with uncanny skill; captured my heart with ease. Held in your warm embrace; a boy became a man. And we shared adventures, that only lovers can. Our anxieties quelled; we are floating on air. And dance in the moonlight, like we haven't got a care. On life's merry-go-round; love dictates how you feel. For today's everything; tomorrow isn't real.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/24/2022 12:05:00 AM
“ we're left floating on air. And dance in the moonlight like we haven't a care.” so romantic Emile. A dream come true to find this kind of love. Beautiful! Congratulations on your first place win. I loved this beauty. Blessings xxoo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/24/2022 7:49:00 AM
Thanks, Connie, your friendly words of encouragement have brought a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/14/2022 6:02:00 PM
Oh how enjoyed reading your precision in rhyme and in the reminiscence of love. Congratulations on your win in the contest. :)Paulette
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/15/2022 7:37:00 AM
Thanks again Paulette, for your wonderful review and support... as always your comments are welcomed and appreciated. Emile.
Date: 3/14/2018 12:45:00 PM
A most pleasant read, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2018 2:03:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are much appreciated, Emile.
Date: 1/16/2015 9:01:00 PM
this is a very nicely written rhyming poem. I enjoyed it.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/17/2015 7:30:00 AM
Thank you very much, your comments are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 1/16/2015 5:03:00 PM
Hello Emile!! A very well-done rhymed write here. The words you've used in this write meld perfectly with your imagery. You actually do much here in five short quatrains!! The directness of you poem is quite compelling. Excellent Work, Sir. A "7" from me and a FAV!! Best Always, Gary
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/17/2015 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Gary, for taking the time and care to give me this truly wonderful review. Emile.
Date: 1/16/2015 2:10:00 PM
Great piece Emile. Great flow that keeps pulling you with it right up to that perfect ending. Great job. Enjoyed this one very much!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/16/2015 3:16:00 PM
Thanks again for your wonderful review and support... as always your comments are welcomed and appreciated. Emile.

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