Tomorrow Isn't Real

As in a fantasy, my wildest dream came true. For the instant we kissed, I fell in love with you. When hope morphed into love, you knew just how to please. And with uncanny skill captured my heart with ease. Held within your embrace, a boy became a man. For we shared emotions, that only lovers can. With anxieties quelled, we felt as light as air. And danced in the moonlight, like we didn't have a care. On life's merry-go-round; time dictates how you feel. For today's everything, tomorrow isn't real.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Marcum Wong Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 12:05 AM
“ we're left floating on air. And dance in the moonlight like we haven't a care.” so romantic Emile. A dream come true to find this kind of love. Beautiful! Congratulations on your first place win. I loved this beauty. Blessings xxoo
Pinet Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 7:49 AM
Thanks, Connie, your friendly words of encouragement have brought a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.
Calasibetta Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 6:02 PM
Oh how enjoyed reading your precision in rhyme and in the reminiscence of love. Congratulations on your win in the contest. :)Paulette
Pinet Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 7:37 AM
Thanks again Paulette, for your wonderful review and support... as always your comments are welcomed and appreciated. Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 12:45 PM
A most pleasant read, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 2:03 PM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are much appreciated, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 9:01 PM
this is a very nicely written rhyming poem. I enjoyed it.
Pinet Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:30 AM
Thank you very much, your comments are always welcome. Emile.
Bateman Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 5:03 PM
Hello Emile!! A very well-done rhymed write here. The words you've used in this write meld perfectly with your imagery. You actually do much here in five short quatrains!! The directness of you poem is quite compelling. Excellent Work, Sir. A "7" from me and a FAV!! Best Always, Gary
Pinet Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:29 AM
Thank you Gary, for taking the time and care to give me this truly wonderful review. Emile.
Flannery Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 2:10 PM
Great piece Emile. Great flow that keeps pulling you with it right up to that perfect ending. Great job. Enjoyed this one very much!
Pinet Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 3:16 PM
Thanks again for your wonderful review and support... as always your comments are welcomed and appreciated. Emile.
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