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Tomorrow

Tomorrow is a beautiful word full of promises and meadows vast. Today but a breeze that, when once stirred, watches moments as they scurry past, those that linger we sometimes may catch. Tomorrow glides in rose-colored hues bluebirds on her shoulders as she waits. Today's troubles will become good news Tomorrow will make sorrows abate For these promises, she will create. Lovely Tomorrow: will she arrive or is she just a spell we have cast? Or, is it a place where hope survives where our longing will be in the past and daydreams we can capture at last. April 13, 2023 for "Writing Challenge--T Words by Constance La France howmanysyllables=9

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Date: 4/17/2023 10:54:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win ... "tomorrow" is an exciting gift ... no one knows the new day ... a lovely poem, Ann :) - hugs
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Date: 4/16/2023 12:45:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. Have a blessed day/week..................
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Date: 4/15/2023 2:31:00 PM
Ann, thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/7/2023 2:01:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Constance!
Date: 4/15/2023 12:56:00 PM
This is beautiful, Ann. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/15/2023 9:40:00 AM
This is lovely Ann, cleverly worded and hopeful. Congrats to you :)
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Date: 4/15/2023 8:25:00 AM
ANN, you have a gift for words. Congratulations, my friend, on creating a work of such great merit.
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Date: 4/15/2023 8:14:00 AM
Sweet, sweet tomorrow. Great work Ann! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/14/2023 3:09:00 PM
As "Annie" said, " tomorrow, tomorrow, is only a day away." I liked the last verse best. I enjoy reading your poetry today, Ann. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 4/14/2023 11:52:00 AM
Very nice poem Ann. I enjoyed :)
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Date: 4/13/2023 8:42:00 PM
Tomorrow is indeed a dawning promise. Well penned + an enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest. Sincerest regards, Brian
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Date: 4/13/2023 3:52:00 PM
Great choice, the last stanza is thought provoking Ann. There is always hope in our tomorrows. b0l
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Date: 4/13/2023 10:56:00 AM
Very well written, young lady. Tomorrow is always a busy day:)
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Date: 4/13/2023 8:50:00 AM
A Lovely write. Have a blessed day...............
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Date: 4/13/2023 8:50:00 AM
Just the thought of tomorrow offers us hope.
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/24/2023 8:45:00 AM
That's true, Jenna, it does. Thanks for commenting.

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