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An Entree Acrostic Challenge Poetry Contest ~ Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

Tomato Soup

Tonight my tummy will smile,
Over my tongue it will go.
May I have more?
Another bowl for me.
Two will fill me up, 
On this winter's night. 


Soup warms me up on a cold night,
Or on a rainy day.
Under my soup the crackers dive,
Pretending to hide from me.

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Linda Alice Fowler

April 7, 2026 at 12:24 PM

Hello sweet lady. Tomato soup with a little whimsy-wonderful fun Paula. Congratulations! :)

Paula Goldsmith

April 7, 2026 at 12:52 PM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Also Thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you found my "Tomato Soup" to have, a little whimsy-wonderful fun. It was a ton of fun to write this Acrostic poem. How about some soup as we write away???

Rachel Treacher

March 31, 2026 at 9:27 AM

This really did make me giggle! Tomato soup is the flavour of my childhood soup memories.

Paula Goldsmith

March 31, 2026 at 9:52 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Glad you enjoyed my "Tomato Soup" write and that it made you giggle. I love a hot cheese sandwich "or" crackers with a cup. It was a ton fun writing this one. How about some soup as we write away???

Janice Canerdy

March 31, 2026 at 7:39 AM

Hey, Paula, I'm back with CONGRATS! Janice

Paula Goldsmith

March 31, 2026 at 9:48 AM

Always great to see you here. Thank You for stopping back over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Also Thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Tomato Soup" write again. I had fun writing this one. How about some soup as we write away???

Karen Jones

March 23, 2026 at 8:54 AM

Back to say congratulations on your place win!

Paula Goldsmith

March 23, 2026 at 9:23 AM

Always great to se you here. Thank You for stopping back over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Also Thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Tomato Soup" write. Soup is extra great when it is cold out or rains. Hungry Yet??? I had fun writing this one. How about some soup as we write away???

Paula Goldsmith

March 23, 2026 at 7:39 AM

"1 Place" "Tomato Soup." ~ Date Written:3/3/2026 ~ Written By Human Poet..........

Sara Kendrick

March 23, 2026 at 5:44 AM

Congratulations on your winning work in Andrea's contest. Way to go. Definitely a delicious choice. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

March 23, 2026 at 7:38 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Also Thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Tomato Soup" write. Soup is extra great when it is cold out or rains. Hungry Yet??? I had fun writing this one. How about some soup as we write away???

Valsa George

March 22, 2026 at 9:55 PM

Hi Paula, soups are my favorite especially on cold evenings. Love the way you did the entry. Congratulations on your first place win, dear friend.

Paula Goldsmith

March 23, 2026 at 7:37 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Also Thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Tomato Soup" write. Yes, soup is great when it is cold or rains. Hungry Yet??? I had fun writing this one. How about some soup as we write away???

Andrea Dietrich

March 22, 2026 at 4:19 PM

this is adorable how you did it. I really love tomato basil soup. Love how you got the crackers into this one. Congrats

Paula Goldsmith

March 23, 2026 at 7:35 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Also Thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Tomato Soup" write. Oh yes, the crackers dive trying to hide from me. Hahaha!!! I enjoyed writing this fun one for your wonderful contest. Thanks for having it and for my wonderful placement. Hungry Yet??? How about some soup as we write away???

Reason A. Poteet

March 20, 2026 at 5:50 PM

One of my favorite soups too, simple to make but I order tomato basil at restaurants a lot too. Well-done, Paula. My son makes soup on Sundays for lunches the first part of the week. He hasn't made tomato yet, I'll make a suggestion to him.

Paula Goldsmith

March 23, 2026 at 7:26 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Glad you enjoyed my "Tomato Soup" write. It is a great soup. I use it for other soups like vegetable. I had fun writing this one. How about some soup as we write away???

Arthur Vaso

March 17, 2026 at 2:12 AM

My favorite!!!

Paula Goldsmith

March 18, 2026 at 3:19 PM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Glad you found my "Tomato Soup" to be, A super Acrostic poem. I also love tomato soup and it is one of my favorites. Maybe I will made soup this week, it sounds great right about now. How about some soup as we write away???

Beryl Edmonds

March 16, 2026 at 3:50 PM

A super Acrostic poem Paula. Tomato soup is my favourite… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith

March 18, 2026 at 3:15 PM

I Am Anaya

March 16, 2026 at 12:47 PM

Comforting Tomato Soup is forever in my kitchen. Great choice & GL in the contest, Paula!

Paula Goldsmith

March 18, 2026 at 3:11 PM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Also Thanks for saying, GL in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my "Tomato Soup" write. It is also great to pour over meatloaf before cooking. Hungry Yet??? I had fun writing this one. How about some soup as we write away???

Paul Callus

March 14, 2026 at 4:07 AM

An enjoyable fun Acrostic, Paula :) What about a mushroom one next! :) ~ Regards & happy weekend // paul

Paula Goldsmith

March 14, 2026 at 1:41 PM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Glad you found my "Tomato Soup" to be, An enjoyable fun Acrostic. I love tomato soup but I also love mushroom or chicken soup. Maybe I will made soup this week, it sounds great right about now. Hope you are OK... How about some soup as we write away???

sara Etgen-Baker

March 6, 2026 at 5:57 PM

nicely done....tomato soup sounds great right about now :-)

Paula Goldsmith

March 7, 2026 at 8:36 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Glad you found my "Tomato Soup" to be, nicely done. Oh yes, tomato soup sounds great right about now but I do Not have any. So Sad!!!! Guess I should make some. Hooray!!!! How about some soup as we write away???

Natasha L Scragg

March 5, 2026 at 3:21 PM

Love this :-D enjoy your tomato soup xx happy souping <3<3<3

Paula Goldsmith

March 6, 2026 at 1:41 PM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Glad you Love my "Tomato Soup" write. I had fun writing this one. How about some soup as we write away???

Janice Canerdy

March 4, 2026 at 7:47 PM

Well done, Paula! Give me a bowl with a grilled cheese. Janice

Paula Goldsmith

March 5, 2026 at 11:51 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Glad you found my "Tomato Soup" to be, Well done. I love tomato soup and grilled cheese sandwich. It makes a great meal. Hooray!!!! How about some soup as we write away???

Jerry Brotherton

March 4, 2026 at 6:25 PM

My wife's favorite is tomato soup and grilled cheese sandwich. Wonderful acrostic

Paula Goldsmith

March 5, 2026 at 11:49 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Glad you found my "Tomato Soup" to be a, Wonderful acrostic. Oh yes, I am with your wife, tomato soup and grilled cheese sandwich makes a great meal. Hooray!!!! How about some soup as we write away???

David Crandall

March 4, 2026 at 12:24 PM

Hmm, tomato soup sounds pretty good. Keep an eye on those crackers! I guess it might be pretty good with basil and some sourdough. I'm getting hungry.

Paula Goldsmith

March 4, 2026 at 12:47 PM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Glad you enjoyed my "Tomato Soup" write. Oh yes, warm sourdough would be great. Now you have me hungry. I had fun writing this one. How about some soup as we write away???

Karen Jones

March 4, 2026 at 12:08 PM

Yummy love tomato soup and your poem! Good luck in the contest!

Paula Goldsmith

March 4, 2026 at 12:45 PM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Also Thanks for your, Good luck in the contest. Glad you Love my "Tomato Soup" write. I had fun writing this one. How about some soup as we write away???

Jay Narain

March 4, 2026 at 11:48 AM

I love soup with crackers, and an apple for lunch. Love it.

Paula Goldsmith

March 4, 2026 at 12:42 PM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Glad you enjoyed my "Tomato Soup" write and the diving Oyster or saltine crackers. I enjoyed writing this one. How about some soup as we write away???

Gershon Wolf

March 3, 2026 at 8:44 PM

Ha, ha. The crackers made this write for me. ~ Hai Ding

Paula Goldsmith

March 4, 2026 at 12:39 PM

Kim Rodrigues

March 3, 2026 at 6:50 PM

Yummy yummy tomato soup! Love the diving crackers too! Oyster or saltines… hugs!

Paula Goldsmith

March 4, 2026 at 12:37 PM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Glad you enjoyed my "Tomato Soup" write. Oh yes, I love both Oyster or saltine diving in my Tomato soup. Hahaha!!! How about some soup as we write away???

Beryl Edmonds

March 3, 2026 at 4:42 PM

A lovely Acrostic poem, Paula, tomato soup is my favourite… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith

March 4, 2026 at 12:35 PM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Glad you found my "Tomato Soup" to be, A lovely Acrostic poem. Oh yes, also one of my favorites. How about some soup as we write away???

Heidi Sands

March 3, 2026 at 1:41 PM

Great Acrostic ! Very well written. I dont like tomato soup , but i like others..i hope all is well. Hugs :)

Paula Goldsmith

March 4, 2026 at 12:32 PM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my fun "Tomato Soup." Glad you found my "Tomato Soup" to be a, Great Acrostic~Very well written. I enjoyed writing this one in the acrostic style. Hugs... How about some soup as we write away???

Paula Goldsmith

March 3, 2026 at 11:55 AM

"Tomato Soup." ~ Date Written:3/3/2026 ~ Written By Human Poet..........

An Entree Acrostic Challenge Poetry Contest ~ Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

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