Togetherness

He, content - sleeps soundly in my arms of love

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Belinda Parish

Date: 2/24/2009 10:29:00 PM

Must have missed this one, how beautiful

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/14/2009 8:55:00 AM

Brian, if only we could all be held "in the arms of trust" on this Valentine's Day! Thanks for your comments on my work. I see you are a prolific writer and I will have to explore more of your poetry. Nice style; very original. Carolyn

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/13/2009 10:00:00 AM

This is so lovely and how real love should be. Thank you for sharing. Love, Robin

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/13/2009 7:11:00 AM

I Love This....the perfect poem for Valentines...into my favorites!! ~ Fond regards, Carrie

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/13/2009 5:08:00 AM

Brian, this is beautiful, love the gentle tone that seems to emit a sense of love and trust as well as the format and flow. Lovely! Michael

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/13/2009 4:10:00 AM

That is my son cradling up in my arms..feeling totally secure..Brian I really loves this.

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 2/13/2009 3:10:00 AM

THAT is a hard love to find, beaufiul Brian, love Kristin