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Together As One

Once, we trailed a lush forest Of sweet desire and fiery embraces - Where the daffodils strayed everywhere And the butterflies were circling - Right under a golden maple tree. The light carried us, high up a Sydney moon Casting it's beams where we Throttled off as a pair so free - One by one, the petals bathed us With a dewy scent of affection, Until the pile of leaves caught The laughter huffing through the wind- As you fell on a mantle of reeds. I remember that was a decade ago When all the flowers bowed, As You and I enveloped as one In love's sweet promise of forever! One Contest for rob carmack 7 Sept 2015

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Date: 10/22/2015 12:38:00 AM
This poem is superb! belated congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/14/2015 1:04:00 PM
Carly, nice win. SKAT
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Date: 9/14/2015 4:20:00 AM
Superb take with this very lovely write Carly n a great win ! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/13/2015 11:46:00 AM
wow, i would have given this a big win myself, carly... sweet congrats!.. huggs
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Date: 9/12/2015 6:18:00 PM
beautifully penned Carly congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/9/2015 3:18:00 PM
CARLY, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT
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