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~1st Place~
Contest: Completely Your Choice (8)
Sponsor: Brian Strand, Judged: 09/13/2020

~2nd Place~
Contest: Best Rhyming Poem April-July 2018
Sponsor: John Hamilton, Judged: 07/12/2018

~8th Place~
Contest: Any Rhyming Poem
Sponsor: Lu Loo, Judged: 04/30/2018

~7th Place~
Contest: New Poems Only
Sponsor: Emile Pinet, Judged: 04/16/2018

Submitted, January 8, 2024, to "Your Choice Premiere Quatrain Contest"
Sponsor, Regina McIntosh

If life were but a simple chart laid out for us to follow, the lovely dreams that fill each heart, would never see tomorrow. Oh, hidden dreams so tucked away in the deep darkness, of our minds- we never know which ones- someday become tomorrow's happy finds. We drift along- blindly at times, accepting what we see in-store; when suddenly, a doorbell chimes that leads us to a brighter shore. So, live life with its routine schemes, within its moments, bright or gray; but leave unlocked your door of dreams- for one may call on you someday

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/15/2020 7:27:00 AM
a lovely sentiment in wonderful rhyme... /when suddenly, a doorbell chimes! Congrats on the win.
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Date: 7/13/2018 7:02:00 PM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again. This is already a fave for me.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/17/2018 7:51:00 PM
Thank you once more for your lovely comments and the fave! Much appreciated, Susan! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/13/2018 6:12:00 PM
Back again with congratulations on your win .... Hugs Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/17/2018 7:51:00 PM
Thank you again for your visit and congratulations, Eve! Hgus, Sandra
Date: 7/12/2018 9:34:00 PM
Returning with an enthusiastic congratulations for your excellent win, Sandra, with your enchanting and rhythmic poem. Warmest wishes and hugs my lovely friend.. ~Susan
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/17/2018 7:49:00 PM
Thank you once again, Susan, for your lovely comment and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/12/2018 1:59:00 PM
I feel we all have the ability to make our dreams into reality. What we continually visualize becomes our reality. Your poem is a reminder of that and it conveys that message so majestically. Congratulations on your deserving top win Sandra! : )
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/12/2018 5:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie, for your congrats and very supportive and uplifting comments. I appreciate them so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/12/2018 9:19:00 AM
Masterful rhymes Sandra, congrats on another win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/12/2018 5:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, John, for your fine contest and my nice placement. Sandra
Date: 5/5/2018 11:22:00 PM
Love this, Sandra. Your poem flows so beautifully and 'dreamily', adding to the great message of it. Congrats on your wins! :) ~ Artsie
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/6/2018 4:29:00 PM
Thank you once again, Artsie, for your very lovely, uplifting comments and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/30/2018 7:48:00 PM
Oh, how absolutely lovely and inspiring, dear Sandra. I adore the content and enchanted imagery of your poem, especially your final two lines that are star dusted in the magic of optimism and hope. Congratulations on your excellent win! Warmest wishes and hugs, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/3/2018 1:28:00 PM
Thank you, Susan, for your visit and lovely, uplifting comments and congratulations! I am truly very grateful for your support. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/30/2018 4:26:00 PM
Back with more congrats, Sandra. Well done.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/3/2018 1:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/30/2018 6:41:00 AM
A great message so masterfully written, Sandra, congrats on your win. John
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/30/2018 3:06:00 PM
Thank you, John! I appreciate your nice visit and very supportive and uplifting comments. Sandra :)
Date: 4/30/2018 6:30:00 AM
This is one of my fave's. Back again to congratulate you for another placement win. An upbeat and inspirational poem.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/30/2018 3:05:00 PM
Thank you once again for another lovely comment, Susan! I am so pleased that it is meaningful to you. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/30/2018 5:59:00 AM
great message, as always from you! you write such beauty with such ease...beautifully expressed sweet Sandra :) thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/30/2018 3:04:00 PM
Thank you for a great contest and my placement, Laura. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/28/2018 8:33:00 AM
TRULY LOVE THIS GEM MY FRIEND--AS I HAVE LIVED THAT. Now have found my soulmate and am in 14 years of that dream and counting!! You always deliver exceptional verses! A fav...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/29/2018 2:47:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Robert, for your very uplifting and supportive comments. I am so pleased that you could personally identify with my message, and thank you for the Fav! Sandra :)
Date: 4/21/2018 6:11:00 PM
Hello Sandra Haight, I like the message your poem reads. Havea nice evening my friend.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/21/2018 6:44:00 PM
Hi Darlene, thank you so much for your visit and very uplifting comments! Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 4/18/2018 7:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! I so like this. A fave. A very delightful poem with a message.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/21/2018 6:51:00 PM
Thank you, Susan, for your lovely comment, congrats, and the fave! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/16/2018 4:26:00 PM
Sandra, there is a magical transition from the first to last stanza...and the final couplet a mantra of hope. Congrats on your placement in the contest
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/18/2018 4:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, John. I appreciate your wonderful critique and congratulations! Sandra
Date: 4/16/2018 3:59:00 PM
Faved, a winner in my book... Mick
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/16/2018 4:05:00 PM
Oh, thank you so much, Mick, for your nice comment and Fave! Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 4/16/2018 1:59:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Sandra. Superbly done.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/16/2018 4:04:00 PM
Thank you, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/16/2018 1:59:00 PM
Love this one Sandra, especially the last verse...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/16/2018 4:04:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie! I really appreciate your visit and nice comment! Sandra
Date: 4/16/2018 12:57:00 PM
We need to follow our dreams and never give up. A wonderful message conveyed in your lovely poem Sandra! Congratulatios on making this short list! : )
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/16/2018 4:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie, for your congratulations and lovely comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/16/2018 12:30:00 PM
I love the idea behind this, always keep yourself open to new challenges and experiences. Congratulations!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/16/2018 4:03:00 PM
Thank you, Anna, for your visit, congrats, and very uplifting comments! Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 4/16/2018 11:22:00 AM
Excellent write, Sandra, like always congratulations on your win!!!!! Hugs Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/16/2018 4:02:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve! You are very kind! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/16/2018 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations Sandra! Your amazing poem has placed in my PoetrySoup contest. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/16/2018 4:02:00 PM
Thank you again for another fine contest, Emile. I enjoyed participating and appreciate my fine placement on your winner's list. Sandra
Date: 4/16/2018 8:27:00 AM
Excellent. Very Inspiring write. Enjoyed it.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/16/2018 4:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ravi, for reading my poem and your lovely comment! Sandra
Date: 4/15/2018 9:21:00 PM
A clearly written and appealing poem. I love the concept of the unseen dream revealed by the unexpected doorbell. (Let’s hope it isn’t a ‘Person from Porlock’ who interrupted Coleridge’s dream of Xanadu). Nice one, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/16/2018 4:00:00 PM
Thank you, Geoffrey, for your visit and very supportive comments! Much appreciated. Sandra
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