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Today Oh My Heart

Today,Oh my heart forget all loved ones, love me,look inside, whisper to my ear all those words of love Sing just for me fulfill my wish close your window to all full moons Just for once you and me become one I'm yours you're mine now =======000=======

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/22/2014 6:57:00 AM

This is wisdom personified Kash. To truly love one's self is the foundation for loving others. It provides the frame work and capacity to appreciate and care for others. Add an abiding love for God and your love will no no limits.

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/21/2013 8:34:00 AM

my first one crash! yours is way better. . . good luck on the contest. . .

Andrea Travis

Date: 7/26/2013 5:27:00 PM

Loved this form! what an awesome work. I truly enjoyed the read. Thanks for your input on my first pantoum. I'm learning from a book that said the length was up to the poet, so i went for it! Modeled after Austin Dobson and Donald Justice. i think my first try could have been more simple! Im so glad you liked it, means alot to me! love your work!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/22/2013 2:30:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your creative work this afternoon..We all need to look inside at times and say words of love to ourselves..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Audrey Haick

Date: 7/21/2013 11:53:00 PM

Everyone should love themselves, Kash and you are so right to demand your heart to do that...."now". Great job! Always, Annalise

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/16/2013 2:14:00 PM

In i meant..Cant use reply button..I have error 500 again darn..i can only comment here

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/16/2013 2:13:00 PM

I don't know what you re eating on the morning to get so romantic..Is it chilli and spice?: )Of coutse its very beautiful..Oh yesl a fav

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/16/2013 2:11:00 PM

I don't know what you re eating on the mornong to get so romantic..Is it chilli and spice?: )Of coutse its very beautiful..Oh yes a fav

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/13/2013 4:50:00 PM

Kash, "close your window to a full moon" this is a great phrase. I enjoyed this entry for the contest. Warm Smiles,mConnie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/12/2013 12:13:00 PM

TGIF!... hi there, kashi..:) huggs

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/12/2013 8:13:00 AM

Excellent piece enjoyed. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2013 11:53:00 PM

yes, Kash, sleepless night are on me this week. I slept only three hours last night. maybe tonight can be different. I can only hope!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/11/2013 2:37:00 PM

yesss to this dreamy, loveable piece, kashi... glad to see something so refreshing from you again...a jewe of a work!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2013 3:00:00 PM

GREAT job, kash. this one is so difficult for me. Maybe I won't do it. in your third line from the bottom: I'm yours, with an S!!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/10/2013 12:57:00 AM

Great one Kash..should be right up at the top...BG

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/9/2013 10:15:00 PM

:) I need to take this message to heart. Very sweet...and true...Just a note, should it be I'm YOURS...you're mine? Just wondering...if for a contest...the one on self love, maybe you should check it out. Hugs!

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/9/2013 10:02:00 PM

Wow, now this write will do extremely well in the contest! I truly loved reading this dynamic poem this evening! What a beautiful piece, Great Work, Kashi!