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Today March 2 2021

Coasting on a thermal that is how I feel today so many changes my head and heart are relieved Today I breathe the sea this morning I glide on a smooth coating of perhaps Hear the sound of nature against the sky mold my thoughts to the ether absolve myself of innocent sins Today I breathe the sea in the afternoon a walk of contemplation to hover cautiously with each step Outside the world calls crossroads always branching again, a pause for clarity tomorrow will come hopefully Today I breathe the sea evening brings me eased mind the shine of a thousand eyes 3-2-2021 1st place

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Date: 3/3/2021 9:20:00 AM
Enjoyed this peaceful write. Especially like the last line :)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 3/29/2021 2:18:00 PM
A pleasure to have you stop and read, and especially comment. I have not had much time to write lately so look forward to the little I get to do here.
Date: 3/3/2021 7:10:00 AM
Fanciful write. Just one issue: the word "breath" is a noun. Did you intend to use the verb "breathe" in your lines?
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 3/29/2021 2:17:00 PM
Thanks Robert...indeed. thanks for stopping. Jeanne

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